Spike & Fluttershy

by Ice Fire

Rejected

When Rarity's door opened for Spike, it was Sweetie Belle who answered. She looked surprised to see the dragon.

"Oh. Hey, Sweetie Belle. Can I see Rarity?"
"Okay. But, what's with the suit?"
"Uh...."
"Nevermind. SIS! SPIKE'S HERE TO SEE YOU!"

Rarity came to the door, and dismissed Sweetie Belle..

"Oh, hello, Spike! What brings you here? Nice tuxedo, by the way. It is downright dazzling!"

Spike rubbed his arm nervously.

Do it, Spike. This may be your only shot on getting Rarity to like you, he thought to himself.

"Uh, R-Rarity? You know about that Canterlot Dance?"

Rarity nodded. Spike continued.

"Well, I was, uh, thinking... if you'd like to be my date to this dance?"
Spike kneeled and held out the rose for Rarity.

She blushed, but didn't answer. In a few minutes, she did.

"I'm sorry, Spike, but I already have a date to the Canterlot Dance."

Spike dropped the rose and his heart broke.

Rarity's got a date...

He stood up, and tried to shake the feeling off.

"Oh...Well I guess that your date is a very lucky pony.
Rarity spoke up. "Oh, he's a very charming pegasus. His name is Thunderlane. What a stunning name that is! Plus, he saved my life at the Wonderbolt Academy."

"Okay... Well, thanks for saying."
"Sorry, Spikey. Maybe next time?"
"..."
Spike waved goodbye and headed for Fluttershy's Cottage.

Spike knocked on the door, and waited for an answer.
Fluttershy opened the door, along with her pet rabbit, Angel.

"Spike? What's with the long face..?"

Spike just looked at his feet. Finally, he spoke up.

" Huuugh. Rarity turned me down when I asked her to be my date to the Canterlot Dance."
"Oh, Spike. Rarity dosen't know what she'll be missing. Come in."

Spike entered the small cottage. It looked bigger on the inside than it did on the outside. Fluttershy flew to her couch, and patted the space next to her, gesturing for Spike to sit next to her.

Spiked hopped onto the couch gloomily.

"So, Spike." Fluttershy started, "Why come to me of all ponies?"

Spike looked up at her, and said, "Because, you're the Element of Kindness, and I know that you'll be willing to help anyone in need. So can you help me, Fluttershy?"

Fluttershy nodded. "Of course. What do you need help with?"

Author's Note:

Is that good? Well, it gets better and juicier like apples on Applejack's orchard in FUTURE CHAPTEEEERRRS!

Comments

[Ice Fire]

BUT NOW

[LadyFacepalm]

XD XD XD I clicked thumbs up and it went from 1 to 3!

[cherryjack]

but now is more cute

[rarityxspike]

2705021 I clicked thumbs up and it went from 4 to 7

[rarityxspike]

I love this story so far can't wait to see what happens next

[LadyFacepalm]

XD XD XD XD XD>>2705159 wow this is soooooooo weird!

[rarityxspike]

2705222 It's because while we're reading people are liking it. So when it comes to us liking it, it updates the likes.

[LadyFacepalm]

yup XD>>2705163

[Author of MADness]

A bit short but ok!

[Ignaltus]

Spike don't want to be alone only.

[APoeticHeart]

I love this so far. I wonder what he would like help with concerning the dance. Also, it felt like to me that Rarity was being a little cold-hearted toward him by telling him that she already had a date with Thunderlane, and rubbed it in his face a bit by telling Spike that Thunderlane saved her life. She could have left that part out, even left the part out about telling Spike about Thunderlane being a charming Pegasus. All she had to say was no and that she already had a date.

[Ice Fire]

Chapter 3 is in progress! It's called "Advice".

I hope you guys like it.

[Ice Fire]

2706705

Oh, uh, never thought of that.

.....

[Smurf]

continue

[APoeticHeart]

2706906 Oh, I hope didn't say anything bad, but that is jus how I felt about how Rarity acted. I mean it is like she just couldn't care less if she hurt his feeilngs or not when she told him about Thunderlane. I like that though, because maybe if Spike goes to the dance with somepony else which I know who, Rarity might become a little jealous.

[trahzo]

I was going to type something but I forgot, so I'll just tell you my favorite battle word..."death"

[Ice Fire]

2707315

Nice to know.
My favorite battle word is...

"ALALALALALALALALALALLALAAAAAAAH!"

it's true.

[bronyoversociallife]

This is adorable.

[supahmariobroz223]

FFFFUCK YOU THUNDERLANE FUCK YOOOOOU!!!!

with that said good job with the chapter