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Spike asks Rarity to go with him to the Canterlot Dance, but she turns him down, because she already has a date. However, Fluttershy comes and sees this, so she tries to cheer him up by going to the dance with him...
In the first place, they were going as friends, but they soon discover more than that...
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BUT NOW
XD XD XD I clicked thumbs up and it went from 1 to 3!
but now is more cute
2705021 I clicked thumbs up and it went from 4 to 7
I love this story so far can't wait to see what happens next
XD XD XD XD XD>>2705159 wow this is soooooooo weird!
2705222 It's because while we're reading people are liking it. So when it comes to us liking it, it updates the likes.
yup XD>>2705163
A bit short but ok!
Spike don't want to be alone only.
I love this so far. I wonder what he would like help with concerning the dance. Also, it felt like to me that Rarity was being a little cold-hearted toward him by telling him that she already had a date with Thunderlane, and rubbed it in his face a bit by telling Spike that Thunderlane saved her life. She could have left that part out, even left the part out about telling Spike about Thunderlane being a charming Pegasus. All she had to say was no and that she already had a date.
That escalted quickly
Chapter 3 is in progress! It's called "Advice".
I hope you guys like it.
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Oh, uh, never thought of that.
.....
continue
A little too short for my liking. But I like where this is going.
2706906 Oh, I hope didn't say anything bad, but that is jus how I felt about how Rarity acted. I mean it is like she just couldn't care less if she hurt his feeilngs or not when she told him about Thunderlane. I like that though, because maybe if Spike goes to the dance with somepony else which I know who, Rarity might become a little jealous.
I was going to type something but I forgot, so I'll just tell you my favorite battle word..."death"
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Nice to know.
My favorite battle word is...
"ALALALALALALALALALALLALAAAAAAAH!"
it's true.
This is adorable.
THE THIRD CHAPTER IS OFICIALLY UP!!!
What Fluttershy would do is use her feminine wiles on Spike.
No so rapid, yes? Along more. You must be sensible with these things.
Uh.. oh.. awkward!
Alright Spike, I love you man, but you got to wake up and smell the tea! There is a mare that has a crush on you and in my opinion a lot more sensitive that Rarity. Give her a chance! 
Umm... Talk about awkward much. Nice chapter
It's not bad, just a tad rushed. Other then that, it's very entertaining!
2710205 I'm with you there. I have always been a bit of a FlutterSpike fan.
2709727 Gesundheit
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Yea, just a tad rushed and in my opinion a tad short. Maybe try to have chapters that are 1000-2000 words apiece? That should slow you down and give you more to say inbetween chapters.
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Hmmm, maybe I should.
I'll think about that on Chapter four.
I am SO sorry for the delay! I was working on a new story. You should really check it out.
Well, the ending is real good. Indeed, Fluttershy is way more sensitive than Rarity in this particular fanfic. Come on Spike, don't let this opportunity be wasted. A beautiful, sweet, caring, and wonderful mare is waiting for you to take her to the dance, her name is Fluttershy.
Do not think about Rarity at this moment. C'mon Spike, do the right thing and make Fluttershy the luckiest mare in all of Equestria. 
great story so far!
good story so far and yes i will say it a bit to short chapters and i know its hard as shit to actually make long chapters
anyway faved and thumbed
This is escalating too quickly.
I really love this story so far :)
Good story, i hope to see the next chapter soon
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...Is that good?
2731368 No. It's not.
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It is coming soon.
It's called "The Dance Is Almost Here".
Awake, Spike!
2731706 I know. I'm not judging you, I'm just talking about the fic.
This is a really cute story you have going on. I'm not going to lie, it does seem a little rushed, but I really like the concept. I look forward to the next chapter.
Flash Sentry, you say?
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Yes.
That's what I say.
DAWWWW!
