Twilight and Rainbow Dash become nurses.
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Oh god.... Twilight, you crafty tease!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Stupid sexy Twlight
lucky rainbow..... why can't we have hospitals like this?!
Yes, because obviously nurses aren't trained professionals that have to take years in grueling courses. No! They just grab random ponies off the street and say!
"Hey, put this on and we'll let you care for these ponies. It's not like they'll die without proper medical attention!"
......Sorry for being overtly critical, but it's really not an easy thing to do. Liking everything else so far though, stupid sexy Twilight.
haha this is coming along nicely. also have to ask skeeter, do you sleep?
2715698 The story never suggested this. Either way, I was planning on having why new nurses and doctors were there explained next chapter.
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Okay, it's just it doesn't make much sense to me that they made Twilight a nurse in the first place. A secretary is what they need, and you could've had a scene where Twilight offered to watch over RD, which considering she only really needs time to recover they would have had no problems with it.
Your story of course and I don't want you to think that I believe my way is the better way.
das plot
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The fact is, that -- as thoroughly educated as Twilight is, she could perform brain surgery given a few minutes to prepare. Twilight is very capable of being a nurse, and damn near anything else.
She's the kingdom's next great Archmage, after all.
~OvO
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You're joking right? I'm sorry, but I'm tired and when that happens my ability to tell a joke from an actual stupid comment goes down the toilet.
Pretty sure it's a joke.....Bloody 5 AM.
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Just twiddle your forefinger at your temple and don't think about it!
~OvO
Oh, Celestia, the build up physically hurts me!
2716323 Yes. Let the buildup burn your being.
Wouldn´t this be a good point to have RD describe how Twi looks to her? In a sexy way ofc to show why her mouth waters in lust? Else it kinda just stands there as a "cause i said so, i don´t need to explain shit" sort of way.^^
Well... that was a bit out of nowhere. I'm still diggin' this fic, but that seemed a bit forced. Overall good chapter, but there were one or two other spots kinda like that, but 2717122 over there already pointed it out.
Why can't human hospitals be like this? So much more... erm, entertaining.
I am with Chrysalis on this^^
This story is beginning to make me wet... THIS CALLS FOR A SANDWICH. When I get all.. funny, I get hungry~
Just kidding, but this is a good story~ and I did get hungry in the middle. It's gonna take more than an amateur description of a flank with just "Everything". I like this.
Twilight must learn the effect she has on ponies, lest she ends up with more than one lover.
She thinks herself to gifted? That is bad for your environments!
I shall read on.