Nice update bro love this story so much.

Horse legs don't bend that way.

4786369 These aren't horses, though.

These are ponies. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

711 likes and a feature for a 26 chapter clop-fiction
I'm afraid to see what this holds... NOT! Time to get reading against my better judgement!

The pegasus leaned over the railing to gaze down at the bottom bunk, which happened to be a hammett, unlike her’s which was an actual bed, and asked,

Perhaps you mean "hammock?" If not, could you please tell me what a hammett is? Because not knowing is sort of making me .

It was a long hug, too; one that must’ve lasted at least a good couple of minutes, but even as she started to listen her grasp, Spitfire just wanted to hold on forever, and break down.

"Loosen," maybe?

Zecora placed her on the bottom hammett, and got into the upper bunk, a place she rather disliked, but only in secret.

"Hammock?" Seriously, what is this thing? And why has Google never heard of it?

She stealthily landed next to the upstairs window on a near by branch, and looked inside.

"Nearby" is one word.

"...Like, you just think you’re allergic, but considering you you somehow didn't smell it, or see it, you didn't have that bad of a reaction.”

One of these is superfluous, though I am not sure which one...

Holy crap, my predictions came to pass! So awesome! Another wrench in the works. This one is shaped like an Wonderbolts' Captain and a zebra... It is a really awkwardly shaped wrench.

KBO.

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Hammett: United States writer of hard-boiled detective fiction (1894-1961)

...This person doesn't belong in my story!

Thanks for the help, by the way. All fixed!

4786744 Oh, yeah, I saw that one. It was when I typed "bed" next to it is when I broke Google.

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Horses also can't throw up, use magic, fly, move the sun or moon, build an advanced industrial-era society, or speak.

As far as i see it, it sounds to me that Spitfire is developing a little something something with Zecora. Probably just me.
~Tobben

The more I read this, the more conflicted I become. I think it's from all the possible emotional backstabbing that can happen, thanks to a world filled with enchanted items.

All this could've been avoided, if Spitfire would've came clean about her feelings. Life is a bitch though, and loves to through obstacles at people.

I've noticed that long TwiDash stories always has Spitfire in them, making one big compition on who loves Rainbow more, Twilight or Spitfire. After awhile it's just ugh, but don't get me wrong though I still like the story. TwiDash is my favorite shipping.

4848891 Don't we all?

Btw, errors are fixed. Thanks!

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That's how I understood it, yeah.

Hmm, I really hope you're leading up to a threesome here...

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Why does Google still work then? Did the nerds fix it?