Twilight and Rainbow Dash become nurses.
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Let's see where this goes
It would appear that the next chapter will have some nice intimate moments, that is IF Twilight decides to do the damn preening
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Finally she admits it to herself. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Things sure are heating up pretty quick looking forward to next update. ^^
its chosing time!
"Goodbyes" is one word. Also, "wanna" should only be used in dialogue.
You need a comma between "now" and "was."
I think you need an "s" at the end of "book."
There should be a comma between "said" and "after."
It looks like we may get little intimacy in the next chapter. However, I will not hold my breath. Tantra is fun and all, but an extreme case of blue balls is dangerous. Here is hoping for future… relief. KBO.
3533654 Fixed. Thanks!
Cute chapter. Twilight finally got over her doubts and Spike just earned, like fifty bro-points or something. It was funny when he remarked on the book by Celestia. I know Spike in the show has the maturity of an 8-year old according to the writers, but I like Spike with a slightly more adult mind in fics. The contrast is always hillarious. Case in point, spike-stache.
Here I am, thinking I was gonna get a nice nurse one shot clopfic. now, I'm 20 chapters deep in a clopless dragged out questionable shipfic. yay.
The good part will come I'm sure. OP will surely deliver.
The wording here just seems off.
Might wanna fix that...
3536212>>3535876 Fixed. Thanks!
3535240 Sorry for not providing a warning.
SOMEPONY MAKE A MOVE OR I'LL GO SPARKLE!!!!
Finally we get to the TwiDash clop
well twi..everyone says just fuck dash and get life over with come on you cant be so blind to the fact you want to tap that Pegasus ass ....I think you should hit the books on sex spells you know the ones that let you grow dicks the type that let you cum 50 times the normal amount or even lasting for longer time spans whats wrong with me?
And FINALLY Twilight's getting the idea of things.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I say 2 or 3 more chapters then we get to the fun part.
This twenty chapter long anticipation is literally murdering me with a knife...but I got high hopes for the next chapter!
I wish my workplace is like that.