Twilight and Rainbow Dash become nurses.
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Twilight.... why can you just can't accept that you love Dash
i swear, twilight's the smartest pony i know, and yet also the dumbest. someone needs to bitch slap her out of her little fantasy world.
Nice chapter bro can't wait for more and also WHY CAN TWILIGHT JUST EXCEPT SHE'S IN LOVE!!!!!!!!! have a great day!
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That's the thing with smart people. Some times we over think and end up looking really stupid.
Still no progress, great.
Twilight still can't accept it, if I were Dash I'd be starting to get insulted
Im all about setting the scene and exposition but its been NINETEEN CHAPTERS of rainbow loving twilight and NINETEEN CHAPTERS of twilight in denial. pick up the pace a little bud
No no no, author your doing fine, dont listen to no one!
Let it slow...
Let it flow...
Let it glow...
I think this thing between Dr. Stables and Nurse Redheart is just as adorable as the Twidash in this story. Somehow Dr. Stables has turned out to be a rather likable character, though I can't put by finger on why. I think he's just sort of funny in an understated way.
I am not sure, however, I think "condition" would be better here.
There should be a comma between "abnormalities" and "such."
Pinkie! Stop breaking the fourth wall!
An unneeded capitalization.
I am not sure what you are going for here.
Is there a way to switch the lyrics of Who's a Silly Pony to fit Twilight and her constant denial of her affections of Rainbow Dash? Because she is just being silly now. KBO.
3479433 Thanks for the pointers.
Look twi baby take it from a girl I know what you feel but look you can't stop da feels you have I felt the same way with my girlfriend I just let them do what they do and now I'm 1 year and 9 mouths with her let your mind stop thinking and let your heart think for you
And now... We introduce the Dr. Stables and Redheart subplot...
And a plant, it seems.
~Skeeter The Lurker
It wouldn't make sense if Twilight's test works - if Twilight's uniform isn't functioning, then how can Rainbow fall in love with her in the first place? or at least, sped up her love?
3500528 Y'know, I was starting to wonder if anyone was going to mention that.
someone is gonna end up looking like a total tool at the end of this, not that I am complaining, I love how your handling the story flow and feel of it, and leave it to twi to over think the workings of the heart...in emotional ways not biological workings, just to be clear
3507272 That's one of the tiny factors that wasn't going to be mentioned unless someone brought it up. Which you did. Nice thinking!
*insert Monty Python 'GET ON WITH IT' here*
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<Yes, get on with it!
3535829 YES GET ON WITH IT!
Should be:
"I needed to know more about these outfits that Twilight and I and all the other nurses wear."
same confusion with subject/object here
you and I*
I think you left something out.