Pinkie Pie has a wonderful life. Surrounded by friends and family, she has everything she could ever want, and never stops smiling. One Hearth's Warming Eve, however, that all changes when Pinkie Pie is abducted and subject to horrific cruelty.
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From bad to worse indeed, it seems. A pity, really; I'd fooled myself into thinking Pinkie might have actually been sleeping after all, but after comments on being 'dead for hours' and 'cold' I knew those hopes were simply wishful thinking, even before Fluttershy's attempts to save her.
I would say that Celestia's anger seemed somewhat unfounded, in that it seemed to escalate really quickly against Twilight, her former student who has just lost two friends (well, three now) and feels wholly responsible. Even worse, Twilight was obviously distressed and made a request that - whilst impossible - did not seem unreasonable, yet Celestia seemed not to take such into account as she responded.
Then again, Celestia might be feeling the stress/hurt more than she's letting on, but I would've thought that Twilight would be more upset than Celestia over the whole ordeal. In short, I feel Celestia's reaction was... disproportionate, given the circumstances.
Other than that little nitpick, however, I really enjoyed this chapter. I do wonder what Twilight will be getting up to, and when she'll return, if she does at all.
i was reading while listening this and it kind of fitting
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ym8JjY4fy-M
its a bunch of emotional mix
oh and good storie really REALLY gore but good.
im still not at last chapter thought.poor pinkie
Nice touch with the livor mortis. As soon as I saw that, I knew there was no helping her, she was gone for hours.
Pinkies dead saw that coming sooner or later either that or she goes on a rampage and where the hell is twilight going off to the past to fix the future???
Pinkie's suicide was foreshadowed pretty clearly in the last chapter, so this isn't entirely unexpected...
But whoa, I didn't expect you to completely kill off all hope that she could've survived before the end of the chapter. In some sick way, I'm relieved that you didn't end it on that kind of cliffhanger only to kill her off in the next chapter. But now that the main character is dead, I have to wonder what direction this story will go from here.
I'm still hooked. The attention this story is getting is criminally low.
5698252 Haha, well it had to happen sometime, I suppose. This is pretty much the end of the first major story arc. The next chapter will wrap up the rest of the story and set up the sequel.
And yeah. I would submit it to somewhere like EQD, but pretty much no one accepts gore :( Oh well. Do you know of any blogs that feature gory stuff?
5702062 The most active MLP goreplace on the Internet that I know of is /r/mylittlenosleep on Reddit. It's not very active, but maybe a couple of people might find the story if it gets posted there.
By all means take your time writing the next chapter, I'll just sit here anxiously biting my fingernails in the meantime...
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*slams you up the against the wall* why did you kill her!? there was hope for her yet! and you had to bloody kill her! why? She could have recovered she could have gotten the help she needed! she didn't have to die you monster! *breaks down crying* anyway that was unexpected unless you have a good reason for killing her off then cool i cant wait for the next installment.
5702062 D-did you say sequel? YAAAAAAAAAAY!
5801783 Yup!
WHO THE FUCK KEEPS DOWNVOTING MY COMMENTS FUCK YOU COWARD! If you have something to say to me say it you fucker! Have you heard of joking around!? I guess not if you got so fucking butthurt that you downvoted me how about instead of hiding behind a dislike button show yourself and tell me why you thought what I said is fucking offensive you asshole!
5804474 Calm down. That's not going to help.
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Sorry the downvoting system on this site is ridiculous.
PINKIEEEEEEEEE!!!
Honestly I'm glad she's dead. She's been through too much to continue living. And no one understood what she's been through. So, this is, while horrible, the most positive outcome.
Honestly, you know this is the best case scenario. No one helped Pinkie because they don't know how. Pinkie was left to her own devices. At least, she won't suffer anymore.
Hopefully, this would give Equestria a wake up call to begin studying on how to treat trauma patients because Pinkie wasn't helped at all. Well, besides her wounds, that is. They only assist her in healing her physical wounds, not mental wounds. The only time I saw the word "therapist" was when Pokey was forcing Pinkie to butcher Rainbow's corpse. Besides that, nothing. No more therapist words, no psychiatrist and no treatment mentioning mental trauma. It's sad honestly, to have a world where a serial killer is quite literally once in a millennium. To be unprepared for that kind of fallout. In fact, he wasn't even caught.