Pinkie Pie has a wonderful life. Surrounded by friends and family, she has everything she could ever want, and never stops smiling. One Hearth's Warming Eve, however, that all changes when Pinkie Pie is abducted and subject to horrific cruelty.
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I never doubted your writing abilities for a second! Great new chapter!
Chilling. A fantastic chapter once again!
Out of all the ways to torture her you chose the eye!? why the eyes why! Anyway this is really getting good even if eye and teeth torture are the only things that make me I cant wait for pokey to get his well deserved ass handed to him and he must really hate mares if his MO is kidnapping torturing and murdering mares.
3010266 I know that, because this story is very well written and Pinkie is my favorite small horsie, it's natural to feel bad for pastel pony being murdered.
Still, don't act like that. It just makes people see an idiot when they read your comment. Take the story for what it is: a story; make-believe.
Good job, dear author. I haven't read something this chilling since Lucefudu's Borderline.
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Is this that gore fic you were talking about in my comments section?
I find the plot interesting, but the gore goes above and beyond anything I've ever seen... so I skip it xD
Fun fact: this scene was the original cut of Un Chien Andalou
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excellent story dude. The story is well written and if your writing it in such a way to make it as gory and disturbing as possible, then youve suceeded. I am now feeling practically sick and my centralised tremors or whatever the doctor calls them are going haywire, and this is coming from someone who usually likes gore. I can't wait to get to the next chapter, if i can stomach it.
PS. these tremor things arent dangerous or anything so don't worry. It just means when i get stressed, have been drinking or experience any one of a number of other symptoms, i get a bit shaky and my voice can be somewhat affected
Beautifully dark
In a fucked up kinda way.
I hope you realise if one were to pop their eye out, they wouldn't feel pain. Of course you were right about the nerve.
I....I don't...I....
I can't even....I....
I've read lots of dark stuff....I've read...I've read graphic things before...many times....
I.....you....
WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS!?
....Sorry....had to let that out....
This is from the eye thing, by the way....I've never freaked out like this at a dark story before, I don't think....
No. I mustn't puke, I mustn't puke, I must not pu_ *hurrrk* Oh god *burrrp* no nonono. Please no *Puke noises* This fic, you evil, disgusting, horrible,(Amazing), MONSTER!
Horrk gurgle blehhhhh
That's literally my whole thought.
Anyone else instinctively covered their left eye as well? (Or was it the right one...)
6363521 Left. And...yeahh....the eye is pretty much one of my biggest fears so I was seriously considering skipping this chapter before I threw up. I managed to make it, but.... jeez....
And I thought I could handle gore... Turns out I'm a fucking wuss xS
Amazingly well-written, but I'm not sure if I can continue...
I've read gore with eye torture before, and let me tell you,THIS actually made me feel uncomfortable.AND THAT'S WHAT I WANT.
Thanks to this chapter I can't stop blinking great story though
Why is this unit now planting a bomb in Pokey's bed?
ONCE AGAIN, POKEY, BURN IN HELL!!!!
Now I'm afraid to go to sleep, thanks a bunch!
Ugh...i don't do eye torture. I've never had a problem with any other kind of torture, but eye stuff always makes me sick.
That's the Element of Loyalty for you right there. You tell Rarity, RD!
Still both she and AJ really need to take a chill pill! I understand that they want to look for Pinkie, but they need to keep a levelhead here. They can't just to rushing off, especially when they don't know where to look!
Okay rainbow and twilight sparkle including AppleJack should chill and look for Pinkie Pie. Okay I understand that it is scary but maybe let twilight explain why pinkie could have went missing. But still it is a good story.
Eugh im an avid gore reader, and not much bothers me since i have aphantasia (lack of an ability to mentally visualize), but theres just something about eye torture that makes my skin crawl. congrats on making me feel green, it doesnt happen often.
WHY THE EYES MAN?? WHY?? FUCK
No, the eyes! That's the worst place mesh gore with!
In hindsight, I should've expected that from the chapter title.