I have Married Fluttershy and had a kid named Flutterfly (Yes I know It sounds like butterfly) She's at School now and I work as a Life coach. (Basically I'm the Pony that you talk to when you have a problem or to get something off your chest or somepony that you just what to talk to.) Right now I'm on my way to pick up Flutterfly from school. When I got there she was at the steps crying. I walk up to her and said
"What's the matter my little butterfly?"
and she told me that the fillies at school was teasing her because she didn't have a cutie mark yet. I told her it's OK if you don't have a cutey mark yet and don't let the bullys get to her. When we got home Fluttershy was tending to a sick Phoenix. She asked Flutterfly how school was and she replied
"It was OK but, some fillies was teasing me because I didn't have a cutie mark yet." Fluttershy asked if Flutterfly had homework to work on. Then Flutterfly went to her room to work on her homework. Then She asked me to tell Flutterfly about my life as a human and how I became a pony. (I don't know if she ready for that story yet. But then again Flutterfly was wise for her age.) After Dinner I told her my life story.
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Self Insert Gary Stu who falls in love with one of the Mane 6.
I'm more of a person that can thinks up the "what if" factors of a story.
But, as far as details go....
It's kind of iffy.
You know "sometimes you got it and sometimes you don't"
I think my best work is "Boo-busting in Equestria" story.
The worst I think was "Who am I?" story.
If any of you would like to work on a story with me. Let me know.
Thanks
BRD
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I'll work on a story with you! I can be a proofreader!
But a collab? Yeah, I'll do it!
30 dislikes.
Damn.
Like... wow.
That's...
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Your profile pic scares me.
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Well, I'm following you!
OK, I'm doubly pumped on Sabaton right now and I still can't read this without stopping from sheer frustration on how idiotic it is.
I like to give advice on each story I review, but I'll tell you this, author: this story is an idiotic mess that violates so many laws of even mediocre literature that it should be deleted forever and never spoken of again. It's just so amazingly, astoundingly, mind-numbingly idiotic that I can't bear to keep reading it.
If this is a trollfic, you want your readers to actually read it first. Trolling by making the story an indecipherable, incomprehensible mess defeats the point of trolling, since no one will want to read the whole thing.
Well, well, haven't read fics like these in a while. Gonna grab some chips and coke at one point, and enjoy a few hours of laughter, hopefully.
Can I pay you for me to sit on you for a couple days?
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Do you hide under him?
3354344 The couch I hide under is pretty dead.
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You can delete comments here? Oh wow that is just... Cenzorship at this point