One minute when I was on the Computer. The next minute I'm in Equestria. How did that happen?
Fallow me as I start a new life in Ponyville.
i'm a reader and a thinker. But I'm not a great writer.
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FUCK SERIOUS STORIES, THIS IS WHERE IT'S AT.
2593733 RIGHT ON! (wish there was a rock lee with his eyes on fire emoticon!)
Geez, half this story is a parenthetical aside.
Are you sure that you're 21 years-old? Cause I have seen a lot of people. faking their age.
Damn, that cover picture is so amazing. 10/10.
i lik yor drawing its nice
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Just an FYI, deleting comments only gets you more thumbs down on here.
Read before you write also work with the details a little
Self Insert Gary Stu who falls in love with one of the Mane 6.
I'm more of a person that can thinks up the "what if" factors of a story.
But, as far as details go....
It's kind of iffy.
You know "sometimes you got it and sometimes you don't"
I think my best work is "Boo-busting in Equestria" story.
The worst I think was "Who am I?" story.
If any of you would like to work on a story with me. Let me know.
Thanks
BRD
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I'll work on a story with you! I can be a proofreader!
But a collab? Yeah, I'll do it!
30 dislikes.
Damn.
Like... wow.
That's...
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Your profile pic scares me.
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Well, I'm following you!
OK, I'm doubly pumped on Sabaton right now and I still can't read this without stopping from sheer frustration on how idiotic it is.
I like to give advice on each story I review, but I'll tell you this, author: this story is an idiotic mess that violates so many laws of even mediocre literature that it should be deleted forever and never spoken of again. It's just so amazingly, astoundingly, mind-numbingly idiotic that I can't bear to keep reading it.
If this is a trollfic, you want your readers to actually read it first. Trolling by making the story an indecipherable, incomprehensible mess defeats the point of trolling, since no one will want to read the whole thing.
Well, well, haven't read fics like these in a while. Gonna grab some chips and coke at one point, and enjoy a few hours of laughter, hopefully.
This needs a comma.
Can I pay you for me to sit on you for a couple days?
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Do you hide under him?
3354344 The couch I hide under is pretty dead.
...
Oh my god. Are you still policing the comments of a year-and-a-half-old story to delete ones you don't like?
That bugged me more than it should have...
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This is so old, I know none of these people, nor are they even active anymore!
Except Lokimen. Him and I are good buddies.
I want that 10 minutes of my life back.
I don't even know where to start with this one. The story isn't to my liking but your writing style is what has probably brought all the downvotes. Check out other stories and follow the writing style most authors on here use.
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I was going to post one of my trademark "asshole in a gif" gifs, but. I realized I do not have the necessary reaction to express just how bad this is.
That comment graveyard tho
This is one of the worst stories I've read in my entire life... gg
If you're sarcastic enough, they'll never suspect a thing
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You can delete comments here? Oh wow that is just... Cenzorship at this point
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Lol random but I actually remember commenting that. Can't believe it was 9 years ago already.