Gotta say I adore this story, and after that last paragraph i'm anticipating the next chapter quite a bit. On a side not this site really needs a Princess Molestia emoticon.
That was bloody excellent, mate! Seriously, the time jump was well executed IMO, the party was good, (Though the musicians seemed a little... TOO happy/eager to play for them at first, but that's just MO.), Pinkie was in EXCELLENT forme, the romance was good... Actually, one of the only things I felt could ahve been improved was how easily-ish Big Mac recovered. I mean, maybe I read it wrong, but he only maybe shed a tear or two, and after Flutters said it was okay, he was fine. It just... Felt a LITTLE anti-climatic, at least for me. Still, overall, STILL a five-star fic easily!
(And dat ending... I shall do mine best to await the next chapter PATIENTLY... ... ... GIMME DA CHAPTER NOAW! XD Just kidding! Take you time! Don't rush the quality! I'd rather have quality over quantity!)
Gotta say I adore this story, and after that last paragraph i'm anticipating the next chapter quite a bit.
On a side not this site really needs a Princess Molestia emoticon.
That was bloody excellent, mate! Seriously, the time jump was well executed IMO, the party was good, (Though the musicians seemed a little... TOO happy/eager to play for them at first, but that's just MO.), Pinkie was in EXCELLENT forme, the romance was good... Actually, one of the only things I felt could ahve been improved was how easily-ish Big Mac recovered. I mean, maybe I read it wrong, but he only maybe shed a tear or two, and after Flutters said it was okay, he was fine. It just... Felt a LITTLE anti-climatic, at least for me. Still, overall, STILL a five-star fic easily!
(And dat ending... I shall do mine best to await the next chapter PATIENTLY... ... ... GIMME DA CHAPTER NOAW! XD Just kidding! Take you time! Don't rush the quality! I'd rather have quality over quantity!)
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
Mac story... all of my manly tears
and now as i thought i knew why the mature tag... so i know in some kind of way how this is going to be lol
keep up the awesome work you are doing cant wait for more
...Fantastic.
MORE
sweet celestia, THIS IS GETTING GOOD INDEED.
Keep it up!!
210167 keep it up?..... BM certainly will be in the next chapter is my guess
ALL OF MY FEELS
Applejack leaned into Rainbow’s neck, giggling while she enjoyed the luxury of the pegasus nibbling onto her ear gently.
Was that a Dash of... APPLEDASH?
WTF fluttershy? Clopping?
Big Mac made a very sweet gesture for Fluttershy there, that reveal of Big Mac's pain was very heartbreaking. Really enjoyed that ending, oh my.