D'aww.

Cute, yeah, but Fluttershy seems OOC.

I approve. I honestly like the idea that Fluttershy gets like this if she had a coltfriend. Makes a lot of sense giving her personality around animals. Great story so far, keep it up

Lovely you must give us MOAR lol
Cant wait for the next part and in some kind of way as their relation advance im starting to get why this has a mature tag but wont say i dont want to spoil the idea
Keep up the awesome work you are doing my friend

You know, even IF this becomes a clop-fic at the end, I might just go ahead and read all of it anyhoof! This is REALLY good! 11 stars, bro! /]

~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

A D'aww clopfic? That's new. And completely wonderful. I think my body is ready.

You know, I actually laughed when she said "you can kiss my face"

In my opinion Big macintosh is probably the most likey to be in a relationship with fluttershy their just seem so alike you know? Plus it's the cutest one

Eeyup

Very well done conflict between them with both blaming themselves for it. Heartwarming reconciliation.