That Night
Twilight Sparkle was a very focused pony. She had to be; her life demanded it. Whether it was learning a new spell, reading a new book, organizing the library, or conducting an experiment; things went wrong when she didn't focus. Today, Twilight Sparkle couldn't focus. Needless to say, it hadn't been the best day for her.
No matter what she did, all day the question had haunted her. What will I do? This wasn't the first time a question had been caught in her mind, but this one was annoyingly unsolvable. She couldn't do the research to find out what would happen, nor could she simply apply the knowledge within one of her books. No, the answer to this question was inside her, and in her own heart, Twilight Sparkle was as blind as a bat.
She grumbled as she trudged her way up the stairs, making her way to the bathroom. Though the sun was still fairly high in the sky, she had decided to turn in early. She'd had enough close calls as it was. That's the last time I'm ever working with chemicals with something else on my mind. She looked up at her mane, thankful it hadn't been burned off.
She turned on the shower, waited until it was steaming, and hopped in. She let out a coo of pleasure as the cascade of water made its way down her tense body. She stood there, enjoying the warmth as it relaxed her muscles. With a satisfied sigh, she grabbed her shampoo and proceeded to wash her mane.
Finished with maintaining her hygiene, Twilight stayed in the shower pondering the question that had vexed her all day. What am I going to do? She closed her eyes, enjoying the feeling of the water coursing down her back. I have feelings for this pony, but I don't know anything about them. For all I know they could be some lunatic. She frowned, struggling not to get stressed again.
I just don't know what to do... Twilight's mind churned, bringing an idea to the front of her mind. But Rarity might! Why didn't I think of that before? Rarity knows romance. She'll be able to help me no problem. The water shut off and Twilight got out of the shower. I'll go and see her tomorrow with the letters and she'll help me figure everything out. A plan in place, Twilight dried off and retired to bed, eager for the next day to arrive.
The sound of a quill scratching on paper filled the room as Rainbow Dash worked. Over the course of the last week she had become accustomed to that sound, she'd even come to find it rather relaxing. She did not write with the fever that she once had, now writing in a nice flow as the words came to her mind. A dictionary and thesaurus sat beside her, ready to be used whenever she couldn't quite find the words. She smiled softly as she wrote, making sure she found just the right words to weave into the letter. She thought through her work carefully, more so than she had for any of the other letters.
Every now and then, she cast a glance out her window toward the night sky. The moon and the stars resting there were inspiration enough as she wrote. The words came easily, more naturally than ever before. If Rainbow Dash didn't know otherwise, she would've said she actually did like Twilight. With a flourish of the quill, she signed the letter.
Dearest Twilight Sparkle,
If I had a greater gift of words, I would craft from all that is in my heart and head a poem like no other for you. No, not an epic nor a sonnet, for neither can capture the truth of my feelings. No, the feelings and thoughts I have will not be communicated by simple words, and yet I must try.
I often wake in fear of you being nothing but a dream, for how can any one pony like you be real? Somepony so good, and so pure. Should I wake one day to find this to be true, I do not know what would become of me.
You are kind. From the first day I met you, I knew there was more compassion and caring inside you than I have ever possessed, and yet when I am with you, I strive to find that kindness in myself, for it is what you deserve.
You are honest, both to yourself and to others, a trait that is more rare and more valuable than the largest of diamonds.
You are generous, willingly giving others the most valuable things you posses. You give us your time and your presence, both blessings that we don't deserve.
You are happy, which in itself is difficult, but much more so when it is not only your own happiness you consider, but that of others.
You are loyal to others when they need you the most, even putting their needs above yourself, and yet you are always loyal to what you believe in.
Each of these traits is admirable on it’s own, worthy of endless praise. And yet, in you I find them all. Never before have I seen that, and it makes you the most beautiful and incredible mare in the world, and I am blessed, more so than I deserve, to have met you.
An Admirer
The world seemed to fall away from Dash as she read through the letter. Something wasn't right with it. It wasn't quite the same. As she read it over, it was like she was separate from her body, but could still experience what it felt. Why was it when she'd thought through the letter more, it seemed worse. She felt the fluttering in her stomach, her heartbeat and breathing speeding up. She felt the blush spread across her face and she felt the warmth from her heart spread throughout her. She felt all the tell-tale signs, and blanched.
Rainbow Dash felt like she was going to be sick. She slowly rose to her hooves and tried to make her way to her room. Her legs shook and she didn't trust her wings to support her. Don't think about it, she pleaded with herself. Come on Dash, just don't think about it. If you don't think about it, it'll all go away. You're just tired. If you go to sleep, you'll be fine when you wake up. With those thoughts, Rainbow Dash clambered into her bed and tried to shut off her thoughts. It was a long night with very little sleep.
The town was buzzing, parents running errands while their foals were in school, ponies heading to the market or ponies just out enjoying the lovely day. The air was full with the sounds of spring and it was impossible to be in a bad mood.
Twilight made her way through the town, heading to Sugarcube Corner. It would be good to see Pinkie Pie, not to mention she could use something to stop her stomach from growling. That's what you get for not having a decent breakfast. she scolded herself.
As was to be expected for that time of the day, Sugarcube Corner was fairly packed. Acknowledging a wave from Mrs. Cake who was manning the counter, she hopped in line. One cupcake instead of a balanced breakfast won't hurt me as long as I don't make it a common occurrence, she reasoned.
“Hello Mrs. Cake.” Twilight smiled when she reached the front of the line. “Could I have a vanilla cupcake please?”
“Sure dearie!” Mrs. Cake replied, taking a cupcake from the display case. “That’ll be two bits.”
Giving her the money, Twilight asked, “Where's Pinkie?”
“I haven't seen her this morning, though if I had to guess I’d say to check the market.”
“Thanks Mrs. Cake, have a nice day!” With that Twilight departed, munching her cupcake on her way to the Carousel Boutique. I wonder why Pinkie’s at the market? Twilight pondered. Maybe I'll see her. I have to head through the market anyway.
She entered the market and looked around as she walked, hoping to see her bright friend somewhere. Finally she spotted a flash of pink inside Quills and Sofas. Why would Pinkie be in there? Curious, Twilight peered in through the window, trying not to catch her friend’s eye. Pinkie had just finished paying, smiling happily with her purchases in a small bag.
“Hey Pinkie!” chirped Twilight as Pinkie left the store. Pinkie did a double take as she heard Twilight’s voice.
“Oh, h-hey Twilight,” she said in an entirely un-Pinkie-like way. She gulped nervously and looked as if she’d stolen from the Princess herself. “HowareyoudoinggoodtohearIgottagobye.” In an instant, Pinkie pie was gone, leaving a very confused Twilight in her wake.
That was weird. Twilight stared after Pinkie. And more so than usual for Pinkie. I wonder why she was in Quills and Sofas. An expression of comprehension slowly dawned on her face. No... It couldn’t be, she told herself, reasoning that it was too out of character.
There's no way Pinkie could ever write something like the letters. she thought, trying to quell her curiosity.
Don't be so quick to judge. It would explain why she was so panicked when she saw you. One half of her said, making a good point
But it’s Pinkie! She’s never even talked about relationships with anypony, let alone one of her best friends. She tried to tell herself.
But doesn’t that just help her case? She doesn’t ever talk about relationships so of course she wouldn’t just come out and tell you. You’re just denying it because you never considered it could be a mare!
Th- b-ut- I-I... Twilight stuttered, shocked by her own accusation. I guess I didn’t consider it, but that doesn’t mean it’s her! she justified.
And what if it is? she asked herself. Either way, she's obviously freaked out about something. As a good friend you should make sure everything is alright.
I guess I should make sure, just in case. she finally decided.
With that, Twilight set out after Pinkie. As she ran through town, she couldn’t help but imagine Pinkie writing the letters. Could Pinkie really be so eloquent? I know she shows flashes of her brilliance. Maybe she’s a different pony under the crazy party mare.
She cast a quick spell to determine Pinkie’s location. She was at the library. If she's running from me, why would she go to the library?
A teleport later, Twilight was in the library. At the sound of her sudden appearance, Pinkie turned slowly around. They were in Twilight's room and Pinkie was at the desk. She must've been trying to get the letters. When she saw me, she must've figured I knew that it was her and panicked. She wants to get rid of the letters so that maybe I'll forget. Pinkie glanced towards the door, trying to figure out if she had enough time to escape.
“Pinkie, don’t worry.” That got Pinkie’s attention, bringing her focus back to Twilight. “It’s okay.”
“Really Twilight?” She asked, eyes wide in shock. “Are you sure?”
“Yes Pinkie, I am.” Twilight smiled softly. “It took me a bit to figure out that it was you, and at first I wasn’t sure how I felt about it, but now I’ve accepted it. I think I'm okay with it.”
Pinkies face split into a huge grin. “Oh, Twilight! You have no idea how happy that makes me. I thought for sure you’d be angry.”
Twilight shook her head. “I’m not that kind of mare Pinkie. I accept you for who you are. Plus how could I ever be angry at you. Not after how romantic those letters were.”
“Oh, Twilight.” Pinkie cooed before it hit her, “Wait a minute, romantic?” She asked.
Twilight frowned. “Yes, the letters you wrote me were some of the most romantic things I’ve ever read!”
Pinkie giggled, “Oh Twilight, you’re such a silly filly. I didn’t send you any letters!”
“What!” Twilight screeched, “But what were you talking about then? Why were you in Quills and Sofas if you didn’t need more quills to write with? And why did you freak out at the market when I saw you?”
Pinkie looked anywhere but at Twilight. “Do I have to tell you?” she pleaded.
“Yes.” Twilight’s voice was full of danger, making Pinkie gulp.
“Fine. I was at Quills and Sofas because I needed to get new quills. Not because I was writing you love letters with them, but because I 'borrowed’ yours for a prank and they kinda got destroyed.”
Twilight could only stare at Pinkie, a flat expression on her face. "Get out."
Nodding quickly, Pinkie obeyed, vanishing in an instant. Groaning, Twilight facehoofed. It was going to be a long day.
2568014>>2567688 There ya go!
You took a major step backwards in your letter RD. Write with your heart not with your head. If anything that was more like the first one than the later ones.
Oh Pinkie, what are we going to do with you?
Twilight's reaction:
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Lol. Poor Twilight thought it was Pinkie. Hehe, as if. Adorable, as expected.
Give in, Rainbow. You know the truth, deep down...
Squee!
A few things, once again. In the first paragraph of Rainbow's portion, there is a double space between words.
Between "find it" and "rather relaxing."
The beginning of Rainbow's newest letter isn't italicized, but that's just a formatting issue.
Once it goes back to Twilight, the grammar for the speech attributions to her thoughts gets pretty messed up sometimes. The first thing she thinks has a period instead of a comma, for example. I'll post some quotes with the errors in bold.
Other than that, another great chapter with a funny little twist!
Twinklit Spekkz end Rianbowie Dsash iz OPT!1
Urgh i really need to stop reading these as soon as they come out.
It feels like i need to wait like forever for the next chapter /sigh.
Aww well keep up the good work im looking forward to the next chapter!
I like the new letter. Less poetic, but more heartfelt. Enough to smack her in between the eyes with realization, too. Oh, Dashie, what're you gonna do now?
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This is my new favorite comment of anything ever.
Also this story is awesome. The only flaw is the updates are too short! I need more!
I certainly didn't expect the Pinkie diversion, nicely done. Twilight's flat "get out" was priceless.
You know what's the real problem with your letter, Rainbow? It broadcasts your identity as someone who knows Twilight personally. Possibly even as an Element bearer, since Twilight is far from unable to put two and two together. And you're lucky you'll end up feeling the love you faked. You'll look slightly less jerkish for playing with her emotions that way.
These letters are really good. As said previously, you better deserve the love you created in Twilight's heart, Rainbow.
As mentioned by Prof Yana, you have a few issues with said tags.
I liked these lines;
'No, the answer to this question was inside her, and in her own heart, Twilight Sparkle was as blind as a bat,'
'A plan in place,'
the absolutely subtle 'If Rainbow Dash didn't know otherwise, she would've said she actually did like Twilight,'
'With a flourish of the quill,'
'If you don't think about it, it'll all go away,' which fit Rainbow's character perfectly,
'Rainbow Dash clambered into her bed and tried to shut off her thoughts'
and
'“HowareyoudoinggoodtohearIgottagobye.”'
You forgot the period at the end of 'One half of her said, making a good point.'
This last letter is a pretty big giveaway: it practically spells out for Twi that it is someone she has met personally. I think.
Daaaaaassshhhiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeee~! Your plan is boomerang-ing back! :3
<3 DarqFox
LOL!!!!!!!!!! God that was a great ending to the chapter!!
I for one like the fact that the letter gives her close relationship to Twilight away. It means that Twilight will think twice about going to Rarity with it, which is exactly what I want. Both because it keeps Rarity out of the story a little longer and because it means that Rarity won't have some 'romantic insight' that either screws the whole thing over or wraps it up in two chapters.
That and she won't talk to any of her friends about it which means that none of them have a chance at confessi-...
...
Crap. Pinkie's going to go tell all of them that Twilight has a secret admirer and the one in the group with a crush on her is going to go confess because they think they're about to lose her.
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one word, sir.
More.
D´awwww Dashie feelings finally catched up to her
you could even say that she was "Slow" to figure them out
loving the story
2568277 heh, yeah. It's at least gonna narrow the field down to seven possibles. Pinkie is out, leaves the other four, Celestia and Luna as suspects.
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It. Hurts. Please. STOP!
˙ǝɹoɯ ɹoɟ pɹɐʍɹoɟ buıʞooן 'ɹǝʇdɐɥɔ ʇɐǝɹb ɐ sɐʍ ʇı sʎɐʍʎuɐ
˙ǝuo ǝɯɐɔǝq ı pob ɥo
this is going to be beautiful dash will be the last one she will expect
2568932 how did you even d this?
That last line.
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"Get out." Bit harsh Twilight.
i would put a chife ramsay pick saying get out.but twi's get out was calm
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And the rest of the single population of Ponyville. Or Trixie.
Too much words, I feel.
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I watched that gif through in it's entirety about three times now, and still can't figure out why it's so funny.
Any who, good chapter. Everything is starting to slowly snowball into one big romantic glob of "oh Celestia I have feels for Twilight" on Rainbow's end. She'll admit it eventually, they always do!
First thing to pop into my head...
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...I may have problems.
2622360 I can't see the picture, not enough bandwidth :/
https://imgflip.com/memetemplate/319585746/Unamused-Twilight-Sparkle-MLP