Just finished reading it and im allready hooked in, im here waiting for my jar of yes to be opened and poured all over you, dont make me wait any longer ! <3
Oh my god. That. Is. The. Best. Kirin. EVAR! I love the picture. Nice job on the last two stories, I can tell this one is going to be brilliant, truely brilliant. Keep up the good work my friend.
And now I'm EXCITED!!!!! Though it's so hard to understand, maybe serprate your paragraphs and when others are speaking, other then that and the fact that it's so bucking odd to see Death as friendly, this has my full attention, can't wait to see new enemies and friends, wonder what the other Gods are up to? I very much like your OC, how long with the hybrid live up for? Personally I think if it's between a dragon and alicorn then then live up to 500 years but if it's an alicorn and mortal pony then it's only 200 as I believe that dragons live up to 10,000 years while Gods live for.....well, ever, unless killed by another immortal or they fade from lack of mortals having faith or worshipping them , that's just my option though
2510816 I'm not sure how to answer the question, so I'll just say this:
You know the scene in Aliens vs. Predator: Requiem, where the hunter and his kid get attacked by facehuggers? I laughed when the facehugger got the kid and I said these words to my friends at the movies: "Hah, kid got owned!" I am an evil son of a bitch and take death with fries.
2510915 Oh wow well I guess that constitutes as a yes. Although your oc seem more about bringing about order at the same time. Does this apply to you as well?
2510915 .....................pffftttt yo he got of easy near the end of piranha 3DD where that little girl gets hit (you dont get to see it but you hear it ) and the ending was funny......and it reminded me why i shouldnt watch horror movies with my family.....try explaining to everyone why your laughing after a kid gets his head beaten off right in front of his mom. also what good parent brings there kid to a water park that has life gaurds with bigger boobs then heads,an over 18 section. and not even a few years (i forget the time line bewteen the first and this one) after the massacre at the last big go too swimming place. on an unrealated note where can i get a shotgun leg thing cause that would make a great present for my uncle
2512243 ... ... I wasn't even thinking when I typed that; I went on autopilot. Time to go get my brain examined; probably suffered brain damage from all the face-palming.
2512313 lol. Just an FYI; I've altered the plotline for this story, so instead of Spike having to fight other dragons to get his daughter back, he now has to search for her in a forest equally as dangerous if not more so than the Everfree and save her from a creature from space which is still unknown to me at this stage.
YAY CONTINUATION TIME !~
Get to this ASAP.
Just finished reading it and im allready hooked in, im here waiting for my jar of yes to be opened and poured all over you, dont make me wait any longer ! <3
Aw snap this is getting good.
And the crazy fun begins again.
That was a real nice prologue.
Which means the shit is really going to hit the fan a the next chapter.
I already love it. And, can you provide a picture for Dawn, because I'd like to see Spike and Twilight's daughter.
2503030 A dragon and a Horse, that would be pretty much a Kirin.
2503030>>2503598>>2503613 posted the picture in the author's note.
Oh my god. That. Is. The. Best. Kirin. EVAR! I love the picture. Nice job on the last two stories, I can tell this one is going to be brilliant, truely brilliant. Keep up the good work my friend.
And now I'm EXCITED!!!!! Though it's so hard to understand, maybe serprate your paragraphs and when others are speaking, other then that and the fact that it's so bucking odd to see Death as friendly, this has my full attention, can't wait to see new enemies and friends, wonder what the other Gods are up to? I very much like your OC, how long with the hybrid live up for? Personally I think if it's between a dragon and alicorn then then live up to 500 years but if it's an alicorn and mortal pony then it's only 200 as I believe that dragons live up to 10,000 years while Gods live for.....well, ever, unless killed by another immortal or they fade from lack of mortals having faith or worshipping them , that's just my option though
So big bad Mar has a soft spot WEAKLING!
i'm confused is dawn more pony or dragon?
2508842 the dominant gene is pony.
This sound like it's story just like the last two. Also out of curiosity in your opinion are you as deathly as your Oc? I mean he is bad ass.
2510816 I'm not sure how to answer the question, so I'll just say this:
You know the scene in Aliens vs. Predator: Requiem, where the hunter and his kid get attacked by facehuggers? I laughed when the facehugger got the kid and I said these words to my friends at the movies: "Hah, kid got owned!"
I am an evil son of a bitch and take death with fries.
2510915 Oh wow well I guess that constitutes as a yes. Although your oc seem more about bringing about order at the same time. Does this apply to you as well?
To The Grimm Reaper
I am Big fan and supporter of Twispike stories and just Love your work.
The previous sequel's to this one were amazing and I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
The story is well written, the music that you choose to go with it fits quite well and always leaves me wanting more.
You've done a great job and I look forward to the next chapter.
The Silent Watcher
2510915 .....................pffftttt yo he got of easy near the end of piranha 3DD where that little girl gets hit (you dont get to see it but you hear it )
and the ending was funny......and it reminded me why i shouldnt watch horror movies with my family.....try explaining to everyone why your laughing after a kid gets his head beaten off right in front of his mom.
also what good parent brings there kid to a water park that has life gaurds with bigger boobs then heads,an over 18 section.
and not even a few years (i forget the time line bewteen the first and this one) after the massacre at the last big go too swimming place.
on an unrealated note where can i get a shotgun leg thing cause that would make a great present for my uncle
2510933 I'd rather be at the controlling end of controlled chaos.
Wait, that means Shining Armor is going to be reincarnated. Heh, get's married to Cadence again in another 20 years I bet.
2511875 Huh?
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I wasn't even thinking when I typed that; I went on autopilot.
Time to go get my brain examined; probably suffered brain damage from all the face-palming.
2512313 lol. Just an FYI; I've altered the plotline for this story, so instead of Spike having to fight other dragons to get his daughter back, he now has to search for her in a forest equally as dangerous if not more so than the Everfree and save her from a creature from space which is still unknown to me at this stage.
2512320
That's slightly disappointing. Slightly.
As long as it's better than what you initially planned.
This is great!!!!
I like how your OC is a lot more friendly in this story.
Please sir, may I have some more?