Red Forest creature ummmm..... ME LIKE A LOT

Question: Does it have tentacles?

ok so yeah the dragon idea was really making me NOT want to read this story then you changed it. Now yes I will read it.

I see what are you going to this story, it's one of those father and daughter stories which I personally like. And it's leading we'll too.

Yea, I'm with Nightwatch. Didn't really get why Dragons would want to take her, but a father Spike saving his Daughter Dawn from some strange creature in an unknown forest.....I can get on board with that. Was curious to see what new powers you would give Spike and Dawn for that matter.

2513045

Huh.....long as it's not a human, I'm 100% down. Shit, you were doing PERFECT!!! Then it got messed up a small bit into a wall of text, but I can deal. Damn, Dawn must really age fast, or it skipped ahead in time, either way, that's no way for her to talk to her father, Rainbow came out of no where Wonder what the rest of the Mane Six are up to This is going to be good

its coming
encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS5hsdOY92QbH7dicrNsW2G4nzhJEgl5F9LHNXBqA1Ksf_ZxJhbOA

Dude! There could have been an obvious Hellsing Abridged reference there!

2599285 Oh?

2599373 Dawn could have easily been "chillaxin' in my room like a baller"
See?

2601809 Ah yes. "Hey guys, how's your health plan?...*horns fire*... Apparently, it's great!!!

2602196 Please put that in!
That's perfect for a fight scene with Spike!

2605191 You'll have to remind me. lol

Looking forward for more

I kinda want you to have Mar Grimm fight Spike because he got rid of the darkness in the The Spread of Darkness, and wanting to almost settle Spike's debt to him.

2514874 in ! get it? in space?

2602196 Hey dandy dick! you missed! WOOPWOOPWOOPWOOPWOOP!

So, instead of her being taken by dragons, she's going to be taken by a Red Forest creature from space.

I'm slightly disappointed. Dragons capturing Dawn would have been a good scene, but if this Red Forest creature is better, I hope blood is spilt.