THIS. LOOKS. FUCKING. AMAZING.

You win the internets :3

Edit: Do tons of chapters please. And don't hold back on the brutality/gore. And Diamond's Feelings would be nice. As would Stockholm syndrome. Yes, Stockholm Syndrome would be good. But don't make it happen too soon, that'd be cheap. I once read a fic where Fluttershy was captured and raped for months and months, and eventually she began to enjoy the pain. It was hot. Do you reckon I have kinda dark tastes?

2837414

You mean

My Little Slave.

I think ill give this a like and take my leav Foalcon just doesn't sit well with my mind set

I won't write it (clop) in any form, but ill admit this is really good.

I like where this is going. I look forward for chapter two!

I am simultaneously frightened and intrigued.

2837414 Stockholm is the capital of Finland.

2837644

Stockholm is the capital of Sweden, actually. Helsinki is the capital of Finland.

Stockholm syndrome is where a hostage/victim falls in love with their imprisoner.

2837696
Well... if it involves that then I have an uneasy feeling about this...

2837696 Thank you! You completed the joke. Die Hard ftw.

2837696
Isseus is Finnish. I think he was cracking a joke.

2837753 Ok :P

2837753 Damn you!

2837766 Were you trying to see if I noticed, or just didn't know? :P

I used to know every single European country and their capitals, got forced to learn it at school, so... yeah :P

2837774 No, I just wanted to make a Die Hard joke about Stockholm Syndrome.

2837778 Oh :P

2837778 I don't see how people could get mixed up between Finland and Sweden though :/

That's like getting mixed up between England and Scotland :/

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Well done. Awaiting next chapter. Remember, Silver Spoon Breaks first.

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I came

I saw

I came

2837819 Are you satisfied with us, Master?

2837696
Actually, Stockholm syndrome is when a hostage/victim begins to sympathize with their imprisoner, not necessarily fall in love with them.

Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bells Reaction:

Scootaloo's Reaction:

2837945 Fine, maybe I've read to many stories :P

>mfw* reading plot synopsis
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>mfw* reading story
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2838052 my face when when?

Mistress Moon

... that wasn't a very subtle pseudonym, Luna...

"I feel you, Scoots,"

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2837898 This is about what I expect will happen.

This sounds hot; definitely will be reading it.

This story sounds so fucked up. Yet I will read it...maybe

2837927
Yes. I see much potential here.
Let's see what Fluttershy has to say
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Well, that settles that.

2838105

Your avatar is very much related.

...

2838484 Another one who downvoted without reading I'm guessing.

2838505

Yeahhh, there's something about sexually portrayed children using BDSM knowledge on their paper-thin bully that just sits wrong with my basic human decency.

I see possiblility

This can only go well

2838513 So you came here only to spew us your own morals instead of, I dunno, reading and critiquing stories? I mean, like for the reason this site is for? If you don't intend to read a story before bashing it, please look in the mirror and think for a moment.

Thank you sir for warning me about the quality of your writing. While no too bad, it is a good warning. Other authors should take your example and warn people about their terrible ocs, mary/Gary sues/stues , self inserts, and just plain bad story ideas ( not that I say any of those items were in this story )

2838800 Sarcasm is strong in this one.

2838827 You can stop now. Your first comment was funny. Now you're milking a dead cow.

2838842 Back to reading those stories about ponies killing each other with high powered weapons after a nuclear holocaust? As compared to a cute comedy about kids being kids and getting bad influences from a book? Seeing as that's the _only_ thing that happened in this whole chapter after all. That offended you in some way? Or did you actually even read the chapter? Because that sure is no double standard right there. The 'block button' that you're asking for is reading a story's synopsis... and then not opening and reading it.

The person asking for the story only gave us the framework of the story and few of the events he hoped for, but the story itself is all us. Well, mostly YA, but I helped out! So it is, indeed, directly from the writers' minds.

Oh and yes, the one being sarcastic was me. I just found your comment so hilariously stupid.

2838923 Oh dear, I just checked your profile. Sorry. I never meant to get into a discussion with a 13 year old about sexual topics. Let's most definitely not go there, okay? Just... why on Earth are you even reading garbage like this? It's not healthy for a growing youth.

2838935

why on Earth are you even reading garbage like this?

because internet

2838935

I love you.

More, more, MOAR!

2838513

Thank fucking Christ we don't apply our real morals to stories. Then we'd be REAL fucked up, wouldn't we?

I don't normally read clop, but when I do it's the stuff that pisses people like Aegis Shield off.

2838513

there is no human decency on the internets, aegis

2838988

that is because bronies are bronies, brony
only on the internet can a children's tv show be turned into fap material by the masses

Hmm this seems fairly interesting!

2838935 Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!