The Cutie Mark Crusaders discover an ancient S&M manual and use their newfound wisdom to teach a certain troublesome twosome a lesson they'll never forget.
Well, it's good to see this is continuing at last. Though the way this is going, this is starting to sound more like a comedy fic about the CMC being dominatrices than real ones. I don't know, it may be just me. Regardless, I hope to see more soon.
I'm not sure whether I should be rooting for the Crusaders, feeling sorry for Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, or a little of both. I really hope this doesn't end horribly for all involved. Funny scene with the barn and all.
And yes, the writer is aware that he is going to hell. Giddy even.
Great, I know this awesome, out of the way bar a couple miles from the bowels of Hell. Me and a couple buddies of mine convinced the Devil himself to come on over and unwind a bit, you wanna come?
Oh? Oh! It lives! I have to say, the way you write the CMC is spot on perfect. While this chapter set up a lot of comedy, I'm both curious and cautious to see how this all ends... Probably terribly.
Wow, has it been a year? Crazy stuff. I was really happy to see this get updated, so thank you for persevering and continuing it! I'm not sure how things are going to unfold and this chapter was a great re-introduction into it. I really liked the whole peer pressure bittersweet smile of Sweetie Belle also. A nice group dynamic characterization that adds flavor and personality to the three fillies.
Whilst the dialogue felt rather long-winded, it added a sense of realism. The CMC probably would engage each other with hesitation in a situation like this. A good atmosphere was added with the barn, too; gritty and rustic.
also,
“I really like her... chains?”
I cackled. Nice touch.
I appreciate the effort that's been quite clearly poured into this. Admirable to continue. Overall, a pleasing read.
Not wanting to be left out of the loop, Sweetie Belle pushed her timidity towards the subject matter aside and followed her friends off the metaphorical bridge, forcing herself to comment on the cringeworthy diagram. “I really like her... chains?” she finished, uncertain and wincing.
“She’s an archeologist.” Scootaloo said, as though the correlation between bullwhips and the study of ancient Equestria was the most obvious thing on the planet. “Why?” she asked with pure-hearted oblivity.
Scootaloo waved Sweetie Belle’s suggestion off with a hoof. “Nah, you can keep it for now. I’m just going to have my mom teach me how to use a bullwhip. Besides, it’s not like I can read that stuffy, old thing anyway. It makes more sense if you have it, right?”
Oh man I hope for DT and SS's sake that is a fast learner and a natural with a Bull Whip because she could do some serious damage with that!
GREAT build up to the main event, very detailed and drawn out. I'm sure allot of people are screaming "get to the fun stuff already!" but buck them. I love how you are gradually working up to it. It's more realistic.
I thought you said this was a lost cause?
The plural of dominatrix is dominatrices.
You know, that's a sentence I never thought I'd write.
well about time!
great chapter by the way
Fuck I forgot I favorited this good to see it getting attention I'll be around to read how it goes. Make it juicy would you... Keep it up author
Why do I get the delicious feeling that Di and Silvy would rather have been given the Lament Configuration before all's said and done?
Who is dominatrix moon one of trixies ancestors or an alias for luna at one point
Well, it's good to see this is continuing at last. Though the way this is going, this is starting to sound more like a comedy fic about the CMC being dominatrices than real ones. I don't know, it may be just me. Regardless, I hope to see more soon.
I'm not sure whether I should be rooting for the Crusaders, feeling sorry for Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, or a little of both. I really hope this doesn't end horribly for all involved. Funny scene with the barn and all.
Holy crip in a crapple, it updated.
It's good to see you back on the horse again, forgive the pun. I'm looking forward to the rest, no matter how long they take.
New chapter YAY
OH YEAH, NOW WE'RE TALKING!
Great, I know this awesome, out of the way bar a couple miles from the bowels of Hell. Me and a couple buddies of mine convinced the Devil himself to come on over and unwind a bit, you wanna come?
It appears you waited a year and a week to post this new chapter. Regardless, gonna get to reading.
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Welp, I read it, and I like it.
Oh? Oh! It lives!
I have to say, the way you write the CMC is spot on perfect. While this chapter set up a lot of comedy, I'm both curious and cautious to see how this all ends...
Probably terribly.
Finally a new chapter. But please don't take another year, ok?
Can't wait for the punishment
It's Baaaaack!
Nice update! And Daring Do is Scootaloo's mom? Nice!
Huh, so you changed your mind about finishing it? Well, fantastic. That being said, I am curious as to what you have planned for this in the future.
I shit you not when I say the second I saw this had been undated in my favs list, this song started playing on my playlist:
I now know that there is a God, and he has not abandoned us just yet!
Wow, has it been a year? Crazy stuff. I was really happy to see this get updated, so thank you for persevering and continuing it! I'm not sure how things are going to unfold and this chapter was a great re-introduction into it. I really liked the whole peer pressure bittersweet smile of Sweetie Belle also. A nice group dynamic characterization that adds flavor and personality to the three fillies.
Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh. The best foalcon fic before it's even done with the setup has updated! Dude made my month.
Whilst the dialogue felt rather long-winded, it added a sense of realism. The CMC probably would engage each other with hesitation in a situation like this. A good atmosphere was added with the barn, too; gritty and rustic.
also,
I cackled. Nice touch.
I appreciate the effort that's been quite clearly poured into this. Admirable to continue. Overall, a pleasing read.
so much YES.
I see what you did there!
Oh man I hope for DT and SS's sake that is a fast learner and a natural with a Bull Whip because she could do some serious damage with that!
GREAT build up to the main event, very detailed and drawn out. I'm sure allot of people are screaming "get to the fun stuff already!" but buck them. I love how you are gradually working up to it. It's more realistic.
This chapter made wanna build a go-cart.
.....I don't know why.
Aw, this is actually really adorable so far. Im sad it was canceled.