Temporary Hiatus · 3:28pm Dec 23rd, 2015
A couple of days ago I decided to go back and reread the first few chapters I had posted for this story. What I read was... pretty bad, actually. It's true that it was my first story and I was just getting use to the layout of FimFiction, but at this point it's inexcusable. There are numerous grammar mistakes, format errors and other bits I'm sure I missed.