I have revoked my submission for my story Equestrian Requiem; A Hero's Return because I have finally gotten inspired to write the prequel and once I have finished that I will be rewriting to make it less of a cluster fuck of references and more of a story. By the time you read this i'll have submitted the prequel "Equestrian Requiem" so keep an eye out for that.
*Reading a book grasped in his hooves*
“Hey! Nymph!”
*Sigh* “Oh boy, what now.” *Turns around. “What is it?”
“Heh, hey hole-hoo—”
“Yeah, yeah, hole-hooves I get it. What the hell do you want?”
“How do you think you—”
“I’m talkin’ to the big scaaaary bully, I’ve heard it all before.”
“Pffft, you damn right! I’d be surprised if you ha—”
“Yeah, yeah, I have no friends, whatever.”
The hive had been hit by another blizzard. To make sure noling would get hurt or something, Thorax organized a clean up thing to shovel the snow. However, not everyling was pulling their weight.
“Gender equality until it’s time to shovel the snow!” Hero snapped at a changeling, who was on her phone.
She looked up. “I-I was gonna do it, I—”
“SHUT UP!” literally every changeling in a fifteen mile radius snapped.
Hey everyone, I am very proud to say I finally finished my first every story! So thank you for reading it and I didn't think so many people will like it and thank you also for those who maybe not like but, they gave criticism so I can learn to improve, so their are many people to thank and while I work on the next story, please stay tuned and the adventure will continue! One Puuuuuuuuunch !
*Sitting on a bench, twirling his butterfly knife*
*Scoots over* "Soooo... Hero? Do you have any powers?"
"Uh... Why do you ask?"
"Well, I have Rage, Element Aura has... well guess, and Spearhead... doesn't have any powers but whatever. The point is most of Hero's main characters have powers. So what do you have?"
"Uh... I have Aura's powers. I can control elements..."
"Oh. Pssc, lame."
*Hero ran through Ponyville with Wolf close at his side*
“C’mon buddy! The woods aren’t too far now!”
“Arf!”
“Of course I have a plan for when we get to the woods!”
“Wroof?”
“Okay, I don’t... but Hornheaded-Featherflank won’t follow us back.”
*Wolf barked*
“Fair enough.”
*They continued running until they get corned*
“Ah crap...“
“Aroo?”
“Yes Wolf, we’re screwed.”
*Twilight turns the corner* “You... you and that dog—”
So is recently Cinders of war has release his remake of my story hero for fun but, is not doing like mine which is quite good, it has better Grammar so read it, If you like my story please go give a read so that it can be like! His remake is called hero for fun the hero from nowhere! By cinders of war, I think while since is only still one chapter is not much yet but, It seems better than Mine already.
Greetings and salutation, my name is Wrex and this is my review. This is going to be good for both Marvel and DC comics fans, 'Spider of Super Hero High' a Spider-Man/DC Super Hero Girls. Full disclosure, the title of this review outta give you all a clue on which version it is. In this story, everyone's favorite Web-Slinger is attending a Super Hero high school and fighting more than just his iconic villains. I'll be honest, this story was both enjoyable through the whole story and adventure
Hero waited in his room for a pizza to come. The pizza itself was twenty bits with a soda being three bits. Lucky, Hero had twenty three bits to spare, so he bought the pizza and soda.
Soon, the doorbell rang and he jumped up from the couch and ran over towards the door, opening it. There stood a pony in the usual outfit, but they wore a small necklace with a small celestial idol on it. Hero recognized the sort of religious idol, but didn’t say much on it, until.
“Tip?” the pony asked.
*Hero stumbles around, until falling into Zen’s hooves*
“Ugh... Zenex...?”
“W-What happened to you?”
“M-Mind control... d-don’t ask...”
*Dagger runs over, disguised as a bat pony, before changing back* “Hey Zen, hey Hero.”
“I bucking hate you Dagger...”
“What? You said being mind controlled was one of your kinks.”
“Dagger... I will take that bi hoofband... and fucking hang you from it...”
Per usual the Italics are Naruto's notations.
Name: Fluttershy; Full Ancestral name: Fluttershy Hurricane
Nicknames: Flutters; Shy
Date of Birth: March 24th 2001 AD.
Height: 6 '2
Weight: 206
Age: 23
Mane: Long and pale light grayish rose color with matching bangs often worn over her face to use as a shield of sorts.
Eyes: Moderate Cyan.
Cutiemark: Three butterflies.
Bust Measurement: 44 F
Waist Measurement: 30
Hip Measurement: 42
I was recently going through old posts on another blog, and came across this gem. Adapted from user "Arcanaville" on the City of Heroes forums:
It's never as hard as the developers say it is.
It's never as easy as the users think it is.
The best way to do it is most likely something both groups would initially think is insane.
So, I really like how the fanfic went, though I'm still fixing errors. I've posted the fic on another site and it's getting some good reviews there. With the reviews on there and the likes here, I say it was average. I could probably have done better, but this was the first time in a long time in writing a fanfic and my first MLP fanfic.
“Okay Zen, welcome to Changeling Mating 101.”
“Yay!”
*Chuckles nervously* why couldn’t Hive teach you this...? “Okay, okay. So, I assume you know what your ovipositor is, right?”
“Mhm!”
“Heh, okay. So, I should probably teach you about orgasms.”
“Org-what?”
“Orgasm. It’s what happens when you have intercourse.”
*Crying*
“Aww... Pharynx, do something.”
“Why do I have to do it? Aren’t you supposed to do that?”
“Come on Phar, he’s crying! Do something!”
“No! Don’t you know how much trouble he’s put me through?!”
“Please?”
“Ugh... fine... but you owe me for this...” *he sighs and walks over. “Hey kid...”
*Hero and Zenex were playing with their toys*
*Walks an changeling dressed in army fatigues over* “You’ll never beat Private Cuddles!”
“Yes I will!”
*The two continued playing until...*
“Hey! Look, it’s the doll-eyed nymph!”
*They look over*
“What?”
“Heh, yeah. So typical that he’d be playing with baby toys!”
*Whimpering* “W-What...?”
“Hey! Leave him alone!”
*Thorax dragged Hero into he and Pharynx’s room*
“Pharynx!”
*Looks up from his book* “What is it now, Thorax?”
“I saw Hero doing drugs!”
“I was not!”
*Skeptical* “Show me.”
*Pulls out an inhaler* “See! Drugs!”
“...” *facehoof* “Thorax, you’re a moron...”
“What?”
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