Best typo in KOTD: "She grabs the back of his head and holds it still, as she drives a knee spike into his forehead. She shoves his dad bod away." Christ that's been in there this entire time

God I love writing action, but it can get so annoying. Do you know how hard it is to condense a scene to as few words as possible, while everything still keeps at an intense, clear pace?

Grading Scale:

A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)

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If I got to adapt the Season 10 comics into a movie, I would want to make some revisions that would have made the comics much stronger. Here are my main ideas:

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Looks like the universe really went out of it's way to break Pinkie, huh?

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Spoiler below the break, obviously.

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You know what that means!

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I normally don't mention my Stocking Stuffer Series. It's kind of the thing you just sort of accept and move on, like your racist uncle at Thanksgiving. It exists, and accepting that means half our work as done.

My last one was an interesting exercise due to me writing it at the last minute for Valentine's Day, and being on so many different medications, I may have been hallucinating a little. Stocking Stuffer 3: Candy Ass was half of that fever dream. This was the other half.

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Greetings Everypony!

I wanted to put a little something out for you guys so you know where we're headed so you guys have something to look forward to and then ask you that dreaded question.

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I finally finished it! Thank you everyone for being so patient! The past few weeks have sucked ASS! Do me a solid and leave me some feedback on this next chapter, please and thank you?

So the bombs have fallen! It's time for me to disappear since I have to grind the shit out of fallout 4 and collect everything I find only to scrap it for parts. Well to get to the point I won't be online as often, it'll be 2 weeks or so before I return back maybe less . More news coming, so me and Cosmic are working on a chapter together but it probably won't have any progress till later. I wan't to also say that the

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I know I said I'd be posting one more chapter then doing massive rewrites but...

I really wanna just continue the story for a bit since you all were so patient with me. I'm already a 1000 words in on my next chapter. What is everypony's opinion so far? Are you finding the trial interesting? I wanted to take a small break from all the combat since it takes so much time to write and describe everything. Feel free to message me your predictions, but please don't post spoilers publicly.

No matter how hard I tried, this chapter just keeps coming up short. Everything I try to add, breaks the flow of the chapter. I wanted to lengthen it, but there honestly isn't a good place to do it. I'll come back to it later I guess.

Next chapter is going up as long as I don't accidentally sleep through prime time!

The return of Pony Toys in a new format and an update on my pony videos in general.

https://youtu.be/SJhumCA78fc

Didn't see much in the way of editing. This chapter still feels a tad messy for me, so maybe I'll come back to it.
(EDIT)
Alright, there. Spruced up some descriptions and explained some more stuff. I'm in this middle ground of wanting to explain Taraskan protocol, and not wanting to bore most of you with ideas that you won't care about.

This is too short to publish as a story...but it's still awesome. Maybe I'll put it in a proper story if I ever gather enough drabbles to publish together...

Idol hooves is from Vdrake's story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/174129/the-changeling-of-the-guard, which is awesome btw.

Additional inspiration and help from Vdrake, and Well red, and Formsu over on Discord.

"The train rolls up to the station." began Shining, the DM.

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I'm on chapter 5 currently for editing. Ugh some of these chapters are just so...sloppy. Like some sentences are bland and disorganized, others make me wonder how they got past my editing. In my defense, I was still rather new at writing.