My OC Punkout in three different stages of age growth please tell me what you ponies think but please don't be too harsh I have not started long ago. Actually the beginning of this week I started. Tell me how I can improve.

Stallion
Teen
Colt

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I can't see the pics. If you want to send me a private message I'd be happy to critique/offer suggestions.

1698428

She definitely looks like a Mary Sue

1698428 Nice.

1698545 You do realize that you're being a hypocrite, right?

1698567 thanks i'm wrokin on one right now it's the colt he is mad

1698574

Bitch please.

1698597 You must think you're all big and mighty because you can pop into random forums and say whatever the hell you want. Stupid kid.

please no fight on this thread please 1698611>>1698597

1698611

Fuck you.

1698428

Better than anything I can draw.

My only thing is the "eye transition" in the top two ones. Did you intend the "middle" drawing to not have pupils? If so, it's kind of to me when I see the top one transition to both having pupils as well as clearly defined retinas.

It's bc he is high as fuck I mean its bc I thought it would look more adorable but your the first to point it out

1698648 No, I insist. Fuck you.

1698786

Nono. Fuck YOU!

1698632 Apologies. My honest opinion is that he looks like a Soarin with yellow and green eyes. The first one is pretty creepy almost to the point where I think he wants to rape someone. So, in general, it's about an average or less OC. At least it wasn't made with Pony Creator.

1698795 It's frowned upon for children to curse out their superiors. Learn your place, whelp.

1698823

Stick a carrot up your ass.

1698835 Now, now. That's your fantasy, not mine.

1698795>>1698786 Fuck both of yas!
But no seriously, yellow sclera lawl

1698847 Wat

true dat i got idea of his from the original punkout (just different hair). Now he would have raped every pony but other then that that thanks and all apologies accepted
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1698844

Go jump off a building

1698879 You seem to have a lot of hidden desires for yourself. I would advise against you doing so. Suicide is the coward's way out.

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The second and third pics are pretty good, but the first one just creeps me the hell out

1698858 He has yellow sclera and no shine to his eyes.

1698891 careful he might rape you lol

1698901 I could take that as a threat. I could go over to your page and get you banned. Think this through, stupid child.

1698924

K.

I so sorry!

1698930 I have absolutely no reason to believe you. You've made so many bullshit apologies to people, it seems to be that lying is your only way of speaking.

well i hope that is the end of all that even thou i said no fighting on my thread

1698930>>1698924 lol but its ok

1698935

Well, either I'm going to leave FIMfiction and not get banned or don't leave FIMfiction and get banned.
Either way, I won't return.

1698969 Do it. I don't think you have the guts. Request a ban from the mods and leave. You don't have the balls, do you?

1698990

I'm not gonna do that!

What am I, an idiot? Wait, you;re and idiot!

1698428 Looks very neat!

1699029 Name calling will get you nowhere in life. Besides, why is your typing so terrible?

1699165 thanks

thisis oen i just got done workin on

1699029>>1699487

I am greatly enjoying this for many reasons. Please, continue.

1700228 I'm busy plotting to overthrow the world. I think his mom called him in for lunch. We might continue later. Be on standby.

1698990 1698969

As per 1698962's request, please take your fighting off of his thread, though feel free to continue privately. Thank you!

1700292 wow thanks i thought that comment was invisible or something

1700292 Did he say that personally or are you just referring to the forum post itself? Because in the latter situation, he said at the end

lol but its ok

I only assume that he was fine with it.

EDIT: DISREGARD THAT. PUNKOUT CONFIRMS THAT HE WANTED US TO STOP.

1700305 Sorry, Punk. We'll end it here. Just delete TC's comments if he continues it.

1700317 no! you go the wrong idea it the other guy with the super violent comebacks you was only defending your self i cant be mad at you i don't mind a little bickering just death threats and shit is what I don't like.

pls forgive me!

1700366

You've gotta keep in mind that the only reason he was being "superviolent" was because he's like, twelve or something. He looks young in his videos, so I'm going off of that.

if any pony else comes to this thread or has read this comment pls follow punkout the awesome ME

1700448 but just bc he is 12 does not give him the right to tell some pony else to go kill your self. Sure he may be narrow minded be i don't take kindly to that shit. I just don't like ignorant narrow minded people. and might i add the the true definition of ignorant is the lack of knowledge. come on now da boy knows how to talk so he should know better!!