Write, revise, review, repeat.

Almost done yet another revision of the first chapter of my fic. I've made things a bit easier to follow with some changes wording, added a few details to show more of my protagonists personality, ((by having the way she thinks and reacts to things have a more direct effect on a tense situation.)) I'm in the process of fixing what is the weakest and most lazily written part of it, due to poor pacing and not showing how Aella reacts very well

I'm content with the progress! While it is effecting how quickly I can write and release new chapters, I think it's just as important to clean up some of the earlier chapters. I've grown and learned a lot since I wrote them. I want them to be their best! It is the first few chapters where people often decide if they want to keep reading or not