Chapter 1, now in HD! · 6:27am May 7th, 2023
Chapter one rewrite is finally done, after more time and work than I ever intended to put into it XD Big thanks to The Wandering Zebra for giving me some tips and letting me bounce thoughts and ideas off of him. It’s amazing how effective talking to someone can be in processing and organizing your thoughts. Even something as minor as that can be a MASSIVE help, though, in The Wandering Zebra’s case, they also preread the story and gave some good tips and critics on some of the fics chapters.
Hopefully, everyone enjoys it as much as I do. I think it does a lot more to explore Aella’s character and build up to the inciting incident than the previous version. I also cut out some information that wasn’t needed and reworked out a few scenes to help with clarity and pacing and I’m very happy with how it went! As always, I’m open to input <3
You're welcome! It feels nice talking about writing stories with others.
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It is super fun! Gets the brain juice going!