Even when you write something you can't use, you can still learn from it · 2:34am Oct 20th, 2023
Even when you write stuff that ends up unusable the times not wasted. Today I worked on a DJ pon3 scene. I'm unhappy with the result, but I also learned why. I was more focused on Homages reporting then her desire to give people hope and make the wastes better.
I forgot the motivation behind her actions, and that made her actions feel disingenuous. This is likely a mistake I've made many times without realizing it, and it's something I plan to work on from this point on. I need to keep on mind the reasons behind what each character is saying and doing so I can do a better job writing those actions.
Its always great for a writer to learn from their past work. Loving the fic btw its amazing
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Thank you ^.^ I'm working on the next chapter, but it's a bit slow going if I'm being honest. I had a lot written, but it didn't quite feel right, so I had to take it back to the drawing board. Havn't gotten far into the new version, but I'm much happier with it so far then I was with the last.