Did An OC Test on my Self Insert / EEMMORPG 2nd Intermission's chapter title reveal · 1:06am Dec 5th, 2012
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So I was going around fimfiction last night. Scouring for new stories to read as usual. Another Gamer Luna fan fic popped up.
It's called Luna Discovers Gaming, and the plot of the story should be obvious enough.
Long story short: I've read the first chapter, didn't think it was too bad except for a few aspects of it, and gave my honest opinion in the comment section.
After a series of commenting with the author (which wasn't an internet fight), this guy stepped into our conversation who calls himself,
RandomHero
Honestly, I really like that guy's name.
What I liked even more about him is what he said about the story. He's sort of like me. Understanding to a point, but also gave out a few tips as well.
He also gave the author a link to a website that helps writers understand how their OC would most likely be rated by other people.
So I gave it a try as well.
It's, in my opinion, one of the better OC tests I've taken. It gave me a better look at how my character is placed, and a score as well. Not sure what the total score is, but Chaotic Note is in the green zone for now.
I highly suggest those who have an OC to take this test. It could really help you understand how to improve your character.
Here's the Link to the Test:
The Writer's Mary Sue Test
Here's a snipped shot of my results.
If anything, I'm pleased with my results except for one thing.
I don't know if I've missed the checkboxes or not, but my character (aka me) does have a few personal fantasies of mine.
One flaw is wanting to be Princess Luna's destined lover.
Anyway, that's it for today's blog. I've got to finish up the next Intermission chapter for EEMMORPG.
If you haven't already checked out The Pegasus and the Book of Tomes and Favorited it, now would be a good time. It IS going to be one of my MAIN fan fictions.
Here's the title of the next Intermission chapter of EEMMORPG.
Intermission: Remembrance and a Teacher's Duel
To any new watchers stalkers/readers, I post all the pictures (below the 3 lines) as clickables. Go ahead, try it.
Wh-what just happened?
That's what I would like to know! Where's Luna?
I'll be honest, I like this interpretation of who their parents are. I mean really, rock farm? Kinda far fetched if you ask me.
Ah, there you are Luna! I was wonderin-
Sees Princess Celestia.
I-I really like your mane Celestia!
(Shame on you if you don't know what I'm referencing. Seriously though, that's a nice color scheme for Celestia!)
I'm trying this OC test on Paperback now... Someone needs to modify for use with ponies.
574533 This is made even more complicated by the fact that most of my story takes place inside of a video game.
Heh, I passed ^^
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I scored a 32. Is that bad?
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Depends.
What color is the number?
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Green
took the test and found that I'm more like my OC, Sparky, than I thought. I forgot to check the score though...
As always I am getting a diabetes attack.
thank you <3
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Good. You're good to go. Honestly though, it's better to read the review they give you.
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Why would you Not check the score? And check the review as well. The numbers don't tell you everything.
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You're welcome!
What did I do?
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Oh puh-lease! The pictures you post give me diabetes.
*Bip*
Oh, time for my insuline.
Say luna hi from me. :)
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Thanks. On an unrelated note, have you played Patapon?
Well I took the test for a few of my OCs
One was bad
Two were okay but need a little work
The last two was really good
And yes Tia looks good with that mane color
~Reggie
574627 I got a yellow 57. It says I'm a little close to him or something. maybe I should do something about that...
My final score for Paperback was 26, breaking down- in order-
He's got my nose: 14 (yellow)
He's the Anti-Cool: 3 (blue)
I'm destined for what?: 5 (Green)
Healthy as a Horse: 0 (blue)
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child: 4 (green)
I approve. The Mary Sue test approves too, saying that I care deeply about my character but I'm smart enough to let him stand on his own.
Glad to see I was able to help so many people with their OCs!
And thank you for all the kind words, ChaoticNote (I like your name as welldl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_2.png ). I just do what I can to help my fellow bronies.
574639 Pon, Pon, Pata, Pon (Square, Square, Circle, Square.) Remember it when I played the hell out of the demo (Got pretty much every thing I could) and then my bro destroyed my psp. Lost my datacard so now I cry. I loved that game. Might take that test tom, since I will have more time.
That was very amusing.
Also a positive score. (28)
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Glad to see you all get some pretty good scores. At least you don't run into stuff in the dark while wearing sunglasses.
Also!
574853 This guy.
This guy...
You should check him out. He has a couple good fan fics I believe. I have them in my read later list, so I can't give an accurate scale of how good, but I got a good feeling.
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Daw.
I will admit my first fic (What is Fame without Friendship) is a bit rough around the edges, but people seem to enjoy it none the less.
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I have a soft spot for OCs.
I think some characters people make are great.
Meanwhile, In Magic Duel
Far-fetched? No. It's not far-fetched. Which leads me to ask how one farms rocks...
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Oh I know the rock farm is real, but the idea of a rock farm? I don't even...Why?
Also,
cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-ppissed.png : WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!
575007, well... actually it went like this:
Mirror, Mirror (red): 25
You mean Plaid is out? (green): 6
Plain Joe(Blue): 0
Healthy as a Horse (blue): 2
Momma HATES Him! (Blue): 1
Total: 34 (green)
My first OC, mainly just doing cameos in my first (still prewriting) fic. The main character, which I put much less thought into, had a much more balanced score... two yellows, a green and two blues, for a green outcome.
going to take that test
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He's Got My Nose 19 yellow
You Mean Plaid Is Out? 7 green
I'm Destined For What? 5 green
Angst R Us 11 yellow
Momma HATES Him! 0 blue
Total: 42 green
green is good right?
575356
Honestly, Idk.
Green usually means good.
If you want a good outlook on your character, actually read the review the test gave you.
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i read it, looks alright i think
and "teacher duel"? celetsia vs luna i bet 
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.... Honestly I should write a chapter like that, but no it's not going to be Celestia vs Luna.
EDIT: Not yet anyway.
Just finsihed it I am happy with the result:
Silent Arrow is only a little like you. He isn't really very cool: he blends into crowds, he hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes him run into things. There's never been anything special about him that he could see; boy, is he in for a surprise. He's got no emotional scars to speak of. And he's gotten no slack from you.
In general, you care deeply about Silent Arrow, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. Silent Arrow is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.
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Wha- where- I MUST update Fimfic Enhancements.
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Actually, I just copy and paste them as pictures from here.
I got the same results as you on my OC.
577745 I'm a try one of those things... cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tshock.png
did it work?
EDIT: yes. yes it did.
Thanks for that Mary Sue test. I got the same results as you did, well, the bottom one.
*Takes test* Well it turns out I'm gonna die soon.
well i got a yellow 51 i just have two make a few tweaks with my OC and I wil hopefully be good to go and,overall, it was a fun test.
*Takes test*
Meh, exact same overall as you.
Hm... I've written anything with my OC, but with one I made for a story I am nothing like it!
I took the test. It said "Moon Shine has a healthy and promising future ahead." Awww yeaaah. Mary Sue avoided.
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Good for you.
How did I find this?Oh, yeah, your page.Anyway I was doing this just now with one of my OCs--my main one. Didn't do headcannon for Fiddles yet. Anyway, Cherry Garden was hard to place, that is: they couldn't place her character very well for who she is AT ALL
images.wikia.com/mlp/images/b/b6/ID_Jubileena_S3E3.png
Just did Fiddles too. Similar results. Save one remark: that she is a healthy character.
Eh, I feel the test could be better
Either way, for both, I hardly checked ANY of the boxes! I can count the number on my fingers for both.
For all my characters, I always let them write the story
Back to writing!!!
Just realized there were numbers.
CG: 12
F: can't remember, but I'm gunna go with same-ish...
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... What?
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Cherry Garden got a mark of "12" in the OC Mary Sue test thing. And Fiddlesticks got a "17" (just re-took it).
Is that bad?
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I dunno.
Is it green?
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I guess the lower the number the better?
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Like I said, I'm not very sure. The scoring system is very vague.
In general, you care deeply about [REDACTED], but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. [REDACTED] is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.
That was about the character based on me, But I also did it for My characters Siliya and Patchpunk, and got the same result, despite putting in very different results. I also put in the name ROCKYROCKROCK and checked off every box. It was funny. [Redacted]'s score was 30, Patchpunk's score was 28, Siliya's score was 30, ROCKYROCKROCK's score was 120.
took the test with my Non pony Alias RPG character... seems i made him extremely underpowered, time to reverse superman this dude