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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 2 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Dec
14th
2020

Holiday Plans · 2:11am Dec 14th, 2020

Well, in terms of travel, they're nonexistent since my parents told me to stay away. No Christmas with family this year, though I know I'm hardly alone in that. But as for writing...

Well, I've decided a couple things. I think, after nearly four months of doing it continuously, I've burned out on clop. That's bad news for the Unleash the Magic series, but good news for Firefly. And possibly one other story.

My plan right now is that I'm going to finish off this latest Midnight Rising chapter revamp (Fleur De Lis, anybody?), and then restart work on Firefly. I will attempt to have a new chapter ready by year's end. As for content, I was going to do the bat-ponies, detailing Captain Typhoon's visit to and negotiations with the Nightborne with a matching section from the Highborne. But, I also have a direct request from AJA to head back into the thick of the war. He wants to see combat again, but our heroes are not involved with it at the moment.

But that doesn't mean I can't deliver it. it is time to introduce yet another new character; another OC of AJ_Aficionado's who was in fact mentioned in the first volume. Namely, an earth pony Equestrian Army officer involved in the events around the IS-2 massacre and subsequent Phoenix Fire operation: then-Major Rock Biter, who is destined for a very notable role in this war. He has a WW2 analog in the form of a Soviet General, though I'll keep the details secret for now. But the chapter I'm planning regards the new offensive the gryphons launched and their first major target: the city of Maresk and its major Equestrian Army base of Fort Ironheart, just a couple hundred miles from the border.

Also... a possible major project for the new year. I don't want to get people's hopes up, but: I'm attempting to contact the founder of the Gentlemanverse, the great Demon Eyes Laharl himself, to obtain permission to take over one of his stories, and be allowed to finish one of my all-time favorite war epics on site.

Namely, the superb and sorely missed Feathered Heart.

TFeathered Heart
The exploration of the Gryphon Kingdom and the love between a human and a griffin. While securing trade routes, Gilda reminisces how the humans arrive, the trials they face together, and the one who stole her heart. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
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For those who are unaware, that's a Gentlemanverse story set in the modern day Griffon Kingdom where US Marines ally with the gryphons to fight a war with an ancient griffon enemy. It has Gilda as the protagonist, and is part zombie movie, part military thriller. Yeah, I know how it sounds, but trust me--it works. It was not finished and really deserves to be. I've referenced it in multiple stories, including Five Star Service and even The Lawyer and The Unicorn. It's that good.

I don't know what will come of this, but I will try to get hold of him, and failing that, see what I'm allowed to do with an apparently abandoned story. Updates as I have them. In the meantime, try to enjoy this upcoming holiday season in whatever way you can. I'll do my part with new chapters.

Comments ( 17 )

Understandable. Goodness knows I take long stretches between clop chapters. Enjoy cycling the creative juices.

I really hope we can get through to DEL. Feathered Heart must be finished! It is too great a work to not finish. It's a crime against fiction itself to see it incomplete! :twilightangry2:

Feathered Heart would be great to see updating again... Same with Firefly.

If you want to take over Changeling Roun too, I wouldn't say no.

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part zombie movie, part military thriller

Ahem! part vord. :rainbowdetermined2:

Man, I really miss that story.

I would enjoy a new chapter of Firefly and I can understand that you've burned out on clop after writing it for such a long time.

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Another great incomplete fic. Thanks for reminding me. Firesight would need a bit more time to finish that one though.

All of this is great news! I missed Firefly and also had always wished DEL hadn't left that one... Hope you have a good holiday season, I'm in the same boat as you :twilightsmile:

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Understandable. Goodness knows I take long stretches between clop chapters. Enjoy cycling the creative juices.

I don't normally require that, but I do find I need to recharge those particular creative juices after a while of using (and draining) them. I call it the writing refractory period.

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I really hope we can get through to DEL. Feathered Heart must be finished! It is too great a work to not finish. It's a crime against fiction itself to see it incomplete! :twilightangry2:

Me too, but he hasn't even updated his fanfiction account for two years. :ajsleepy: I'm worried he's moved on completely and gone from the writing business for good. And if I can't reach him? I'll have to see what fimfiction allows me to do. I might just have to finish it somewhere off-site.

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Feathered Heart would be great to see updating again... Same with Firefly.

Agreed!

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If you want to take over Changeling Roun too, I wouldn't say no.

Appreciate the vote of confidence, but that one is a little more out of my comfort zone. I could probably do it, but it'd be a bit of a slog for me. The author you'd really want for that is Denim_Blue, who also enjoys writing for Changelings.

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part zombie movie, part military thriller

Ahem! part vord. :rainbowdetermined2: Man, I really miss that story.

Vord? And yeah, we all do. :raritycry:

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I would enjoy a new chapter of Firefly and I can understand that you've burned out on clop after writing it for such a long time.

Appreciate your understanding. I'll see if I can have a new chapter ready by year's end.

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Another great incomplete fic. Thanks for reminding me. Firesight would need a bit more time to finish that one though.

Yeah, that's a bit out of my wheelhouse. Like I said above, Denim_Blue would be ideal for that one.

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All of this is great news! I missed Firefly and also had always wished DEL hadn't left that one... Hope you have a good holiday season, I'm in the same boat as you :twilightsmile:

Thanks, same to you. I imagine a lot of people are. This year just sucks.

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The Vord are from Codex Alera by Jim Butcher.

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Why not just pile every good abandoned clopfic on his shoulders? I don't think there are many left to be mentioned that I still want to see update.
Well...

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But I don't think that he's quite dead yet.

At some point I should tray and tackle Firefly. Always sounded like an interesting read.

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It's really amazing stuff. Very deep lore, great characters, and memorable battles.

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Rereading my original reply to you, I think I owe you an apology for being too pushy and boastful. Sorry for that. :ajsleepy: I've now deleted it, so I'll simply say the Firefly stories are there if and when you decide to read them.

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Hey, It's cool. "Unleash the magic" is the most 'liked' story but "Firefly" is like a baby to you. I get it. I'm sure it's great.

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Thanks for understanding. Believe me when I say I wish Firefly had the most likes, as it's my favorite creation, but getting readers for it has been a very slow and frustrating process.

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