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Bendy
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I mean, I love you and your work. Criticism is hard for me here~
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Don't' worry, I don't get upset easily. If you find it too hard to criticize me, you don't have to.
Na your good.
I think your good. The interaction are often funny my one criticism would be sometimes thing a bit rushed or like everything happened all at once.
Not at all your stories are side splitting
No. You're not a bad Author.
As for strengths, you tend to excell in writing for niche fetishes, and have an unorthodox, but effective, style of comedy.
The weaknesses directly correlate to the strengths, in that the fetishes you do write for seem to be ill-suited to appealing to a wider audience, and I have yet to see you attempt to approach anything serious or dramatic.
The only criticism I have is that you could have written more.
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Agreed.
You're fine mate, you're fine! You do good great comedic stories Bendy.
I'ma be straight with you, Bendy. Your normal writing style is very, very similar to most other author's trollfic writing style. You write in extremely direct language, and with unnaturally direct dialog, the way people write when they want to mock something by portraying it as simple and/or single-minded. Your exposition is also usually weird and awkwardly inserted, another hallmark of trollfics. And yet another trollfic hallmark is stuff just sort of happening with no buildup and little to no explanation for why or how. You can handwave some stuff especially in a porn context but there IS a limit. I'm not entirely sure you're not a troll playing the long game to be perfectly honest.
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Thanks.
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Yeah, a lot of my stories are a bit short.
5258228
I don't do serious very well.
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I made a lots .... and lots of stories. But yes, many are very short.
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I am somewhat... a trollfic writer. I have written a lot of stories badly on purpose. I'm not even sure I can write a story 'good' really.
You're not a bad author. Your signature style is what derpibooru tags as "stylistic suck". Since it's a deliberate affectation, it falls into its own category. I also enjoyed your older semi-serious stories too.
Who, you? Never! Bendy, you've got to pull yourself together!
Gosh, it disturbs me to see you Bendy,
Looking so down in the dumps.
Every guy here would love to read you, Bendy
Even with macro pony rumps!
There's no guy in the site as admired as you
You're everyone's favorite guy!
Everyone's in awe and inspired by you...
Eh, you know the rest.
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Yeah, most of them were TCB or Friendship is Optimal. I want to say away from those because they insult Celestia and make her evil. I don't mind overpowered ponies, as long as they don't abuse their power. In TCB or Friendship is Optima, Celestia might as well be either Morgoth or Sauron. It fully in their power to help humanity, yet they don't and just basically become a Dark Lord while saying they are not one.
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Don't worry, I'm working on a story (Growing Suns And Moons) where Celestia and Luna get broken OP and grow ridiculously massive (and never stop growing) for their human lover. And despite growing so huge they never hurt anyone in the process.
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Nice
Good authors. Bad authors. That is only the selfish perception of people.
I don't think you're a bad author at all. The very direct way of writing you have is something I like in your stories. All too often, I can find myself thumbing through lore/backstory on someone else's work (especially on NSFW fics) while saying "get to the point already!" That doesn't happen with a Bendy story.
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Well, there is some strengths to it. It may work very well for human x growing pony romance.
Bendy writes the best fics because they always get to the point, unlike others which take WAY too long to get to clop.
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I suppose there's some strengths in that.
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Have a good day.