Chapter is with the editors!

Due to time restrictions and tone, I had to spilt the chapter in two. But I plan to finish AAG Book I this month, no matter what.

So expect a new chapter in two weeks after tomorrow! Two chapters in a year should be something, right?

(Yeah, I know it's not.)

Comments

[badninja]

Did Christmas come early this year!? I guess I will find out in a few weeks!

[Purple Pony]

Yaaaaayyyyyyyy more AAG!!! I just found this story a few weeks ago, but it's already one of my all time favorites. Can't wait to see what you do with it.

I should probably reread the whole thing again, just in case. I might have forgotten a few details in the last few months.

[SQA]

Hey, two chapters is more than none.

[BlueBastard]

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You want the second chapter to come out around Christmas?

[badninja]

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No I was talking about it coming early, like in a few weeks if the writin/editing goes well.

[BlueBastard]

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But if that's a problem, we can delay it until Christmas if you wish.

[badninja]

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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please don't do that!

[Zekromic]

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This pony season is the shit, AAG WILL end this year, and the pony movie. No, Christmas didn't come early, it comes more than once this year

[BlueBastard]

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AAG Ending?

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh you have no idea...

[NachoTheBrony]

Well, now that you aren't writing AAG, but are occupied with the story, I'll put this forward:

She still noticed that everyone present was still staring at her. “Okay, what?”

“DJ,” Celestia began, “it’s been brought to our attention that we’ve done you a great wrong. That we really haven’t been treating you like the sort of individual that you are, and that we should have. And on behalf of everyone, even if they don’t realize it…I apologize. You’re not a pony. You didn’t grow up as one, and we’ve been foisting all this on you. I’m sorry.”

DJ stood there for a second, jaw hung in shock, eyes wide in surprise and ears seemingly alert as if instinct had her looking out for predators as her horse ancestors had once done. But after a second, she managed to compose herself and added, “What brought this on?”

Mike blushed slightly. “I finally told them how you felt.”

“WHAT?”

DJ's reaction at this scene doesn't make sense. Ever since she returned to Earth after the trial, her entire life was her shouting from the rooftops "Don't you get it that I'm human, dammit?!" If anything, her response should have been sarcasm, or whimsy, rather than any degree of surprise.

[Shinzakura]

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It can also be an exclamation of surprise in English, I.e. disbelief in something so fortuitous.

[Zekromic]

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Or the first book at least 😁

[shy sad jaded shard]

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you know if you stick to a chapter drop every july 4th I be cool with that (I mean it fits)