Review #111 - Poneo and Fillyet · 2:42am Jun 15th, 2017
First off, I must mention that I am halfway through reading the Dressing Room series. Just so you know, Georg.
Then, @duvagr007, I'll start Legend of Steele Breaker once I get the Dressing Room series finished.
And finally, @Wonder, I will, very soon, get to your stuff.
Oh, and the sequel's review will be out soon. Without further ado, Review #111:
Poneo and Fillyet by Daedalus Aegle
Poneo and Fillyet by Daedalus Aegle
(Romance, Comedy, Drama)
Princess Flurry Heart and a humble baker's son are in love. But how can they hope to be together when the world is full of forces beyond the powers of ponies that try to tear them apart?
Review
All the yes. Just, all of the yes. This one, if I had to name it, is a romantic cute story, with comedic elements. Why we don't have a "Cute" tag on Fimfiction yet is beyond me. Anyway, Pound Cake is perfectly naive and confused, and in love, and, of course, brilliant. However, contrary to the typical "main character is in love" nervousness, Pound is able to play it cool. Which probably comes from his young age. Then we have Flurry, who also plays it cool with her love. And makes jokes. And they are, together, crazy cute. This here author needs to be arrested because of how adorable this is. But, the review must go on. The narrative of this thing is spot on, as it shoudl be considering nearly the entire piece is narration.
The greatest weakness? Too adorable to care. But, since I must pick something, I'll go with how the Crystal Empire scene is kinda boring. Like, it's just more of the same as earlier.
Recommendation: Recommended for cute. (Cause it's cute and adorable and glorious).
I agree!