Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.
So I finished going over a few more chapters and created an organized document with bullet points about how the future of the story will shape up, so I won't do stuff on a whim with no rime or reason anymore. Also after finishing the seventh season of MLP and briefly going through the chronological order of the world's history, I can safely say that there is no way, no how I would be able to tie
Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing
So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.
I haven't died yet... I just moved on. I barely write anymore although when I do I still write new mlp stories. I feel guilty because whenever I visit this site amd see that two more people starte following me they're just gonna be disappointed
4541922 4541919 Because it's shit, the ending was rushed, and there wasn't really anything to lead the plot anywhere. Everything sort of... happened, without reason
Just to be clear. I don't intend to change it drastically. The general plot would still be there, but I think it could use a little polish around the rough edges
4571673 I want to, but life in the army has been tough as of late, and for years I haven't had any ispiration or drive to write. I have the next mini-chapter for this story almost finished, and I want to finish it, but I cannot promise anything
Yay
Why?
Yay
Why?
Nay!
It is good as it is. Eventualy write spinoff or something new, but don't edit it.
nay, i still have to get around to reading it.
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Because it's shit, the ending was rushed, and there wasn't really anything to lead the plot anywhere. Everything sort of... happened, without reason
Just to be clear. I don't intend to change it drastically. The general plot would still be there, but I think it could use a little polish around the rough edges
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are you going to write more of A mother, a lover and a man with nothing to lose
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I want to, but life in the army has been tough as of late, and for years I haven't had any ispiration or drive to write. I have the next mini-chapter for this story almost finished, and I want to finish it, but I cannot promise anything
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ok i hope you finish. its a amazing story.