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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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  • 106 weeks
    The Elder Brother - A final Goodbye

    Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.

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    3 comments · 803 views
  • 225 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 3

    So I finished going over a few more chapters and created an organized document with bullet points about how the future of the story will shape up, so I won't do stuff on a whim with no rime or reason anymore. Also after finishing the seventh season of MLP and briefly going through the chronological order of the world's history, I can safely say that there is no way, no how I would be able to tie

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    1 comments · 620 views
  • 226 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2

    Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing

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  • 226 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated

    So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.

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  • 314 weeks
    Sooo... yeah...

    I haven't died yet... I just moved on. I barely write anymore although when I do I still write new mlp stories. I feel guilty because whenever I visit this site amd see that two more people starte following me they're just gonna be disappointed

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May
21st
2017

Rewriting 'Love in the eye of the beholder'? · 8:59pm May 21st, 2017

yay or nay?

Report Yoni · 509 views · Story: Love is in the eye of the beholder ·
Comments ( 11 )

Nay!
It is good as it is. Eventualy write spinoff or something new, but don't edit it.

nay, i still have to get around to reading it.

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Because it's shit, the ending was rushed, and there wasn't really anything to lead the plot anywhere. Everything sort of... happened, without reason

Just to be clear. I don't intend to change it drastically. The general plot would still be there, but I think it could use a little polish around the rough edges

4544192
are you going to write more of A mother, a lover and a man with nothing to lose

4571673
I want to, but life in the army has been tough as of late, and for years I haven't had any ispiration or drive to write. I have the next mini-chapter for this story almost finished, and I want to finish it, but I cannot promise anything

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ok i hope you finish. its a amazing story.

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