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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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  • 106 weeks
    The Elder Brother - A final Goodbye

    Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.

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    3 comments · 801 views
  • 225 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 3

    So I finished going over a few more chapters and created an organized document with bullet points about how the future of the story will shape up, so I won't do stuff on a whim with no rime or reason anymore. Also after finishing the seventh season of MLP and briefly going through the chronological order of the world's history, I can safely say that there is no way, no how I would be able to tie

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    1 comments · 619 views
  • 226 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2

    Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing

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  • 226 weeks
    The Elder Brother: reincarnated

    So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.

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    6 comments · 648 views
  • 314 weeks
    Sooo... yeah...

    I haven't died yet... I just moved on. I barely write anymore although when I do I still write new mlp stories. I feel guilty because whenever I visit this site amd see that two more people starte following me they're just gonna be disappointed

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Dec
21st
2019

The Elder Brother: reincarnated · 11:45am Dec 21st, 2019

So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.

I've changed the tag from 'hiatus' to 'incomplete', I've written down a few key ideas that will give this story an actual direction (instead of me writing on a whim), and I'm in the process of improving the existing chapters to provide a more enjoyable, concise, and smooth reading experience. I also have a few key elements I may want to change but I'll address those once I know the majority of those still interested can give their opinion.

Why not address those now, you ask? Well, the story has been stagnant for years, even going before I stopped writing all-together, so a lot of the dedicated readers of this story had already moved on. I don't want to make any drastic changes to the story without grabbing the attention of a lot of those fans, because any changes I'll make should be with the consent of the majority, and not just those who happen to read this blog post.

If this blog post gets a lot of attention, and a lot of readers are willing to help me voice their opinion, I will create a follow-up blog post addressing the major changes I want to incorporate to the story. So until then, I bid you all a great day, and please, let me know what you think.

P.S- I want to personally thank Dash446 who kept the story in their possession and gladly gave it back, you kept my baby safe

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Comments ( 6 )

I really enjoyed reading this story, I will keep an eye out for new updates. :twilightsmile:

First comment :pinkiehappy:

Even if you are around for a few chapters, It was nice seeing you back here again. :twilightsmile:

I would wait another 4 years to get more chapters of The Elder Brother

You have an interesting way of writing "Human meets Pony" stories. I'll definitely be watching your submissions with great interest.

Cant wait for an update

I have read this fix beginning to end more than any other fic on this site and I am in your corner

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