TThe Elder Brother
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
You're a human baby found and adopted by the two most powerful ponies in Equestria. You, together with your little sisters, are going to be the future rulers of Equestria someday. Unless fate decides otherwise
Second Person
Human
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
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Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.
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225 weeks
The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 3

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226 weeks
The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2

Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing
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226 weeks
The Elder Brother: reincarnated

So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.
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314 weeks
Sooo... yeah...

I haven't died yet... I just moved on. I barely write anymore although when I do I still write new mlp stories. I feel guilty because whenever I visit this site amd see that two more people starte following me they're just gonna be disappointed
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Dec

22nd

2019

The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2 · 7:51pm Dec 22nd, 2019

Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing up" and "Act two - memories" to just "growing up" and "memories" as I felt that the addition of acts would make the story feel less organic and flowing.

It would take some time for me to read and redo all of the existing chapters, meaning it might take a while before I'll even begin writing the next chapter, but aside from improving my old chapters, it also helps me get back into the swing of things. I'd really love to hear what you guys think so please, please, please leave a comment.

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