TThe Elder Brother
MLP: FiM
Romance
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You're a human baby found and adopted by the two most powerful ponies in Equestria. You, together with your little sisters, are going to be the future rulers of Equestria someday. Unless fate decides otherwise
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Celestia
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The Elder Brother: reincarnated

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314 weeks
Sooo... yeah...

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11th

2022

The Elder Brother - A final Goodbye · 10:52pm Apr 11th, 2022

Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.

But I didn't want to leave the story in such a state, so I have a parting gift of sorts to all of you wonderful people who supported my terrible writing. The following link is a document with bullet points and ideas about how I wanted the story to take shape, but since I never came around to writing any of it, you may treat it as a non-cannon cannon. I allow people with this link to comment on it because I still want to hear any opinions you might have.

I love you all, and I am sorry,
Yoni

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nACd8c5XDByW-Mek3P_OWjgAyX4WcIHIt3MMX49AyyU/edit?usp=sharing

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