Sneak Peak, Chapter Six · 5:19am Mar 6th, 2017
"Dash, get her out of here!" I shouted.
Rainbow Dash hesitated glancing over at AJ. The blonde girl waved angrily as she ponied up.
"Git her an' go!" she shouted over the gale. "Ah'll be fine!"
The rainbow-hued streak left in her absence faded after a moment, bearing the slight girl out of the fray. Rarity picked herself up, her jeans and formal blouse being covered by our powered up clothing as she glared at the Harpy.
"How dare you hurt Fluttershy," she gritted. "How. Dare. You!" She hurled a shield fragment at the laughing man. Much like my bolt in the dream from the other night, it passed through him without effect.
Pinkie snatched up a handful of pebbles from the walkway and started throwing them at Acerak, each of the tiny explosions distracting him as I tried to get to the fallen Siren. Sonata reached her first, pulling off her sweater and pressing it tightly to Adagio's arm, staunching the blood flow.
I reached her side and tried to pull some of her pain, but I couldn't touch her emotions. Sonata looked at me with panic in her eyes.
"I can't get our Song to touch her wound!"
I was about to try again when I saw her eyes widen. "Sunset!"
I was grabbed by the throat and lifted up, finding myself facing the Harpy as he lifted me into the air.
"I have had enough of you, Seer," he hissed, raising his other hand.
I screamed as he shoved it through my face, the feel of talons ripping at something in my soul. I was cast aside like a dirty rag as a combined assault of diamond shields and exploding stones shot up. I felt someone grab me as I fell, seeing purple through the haze of pain.
The pain started to fade, and I saw Twilight holding me, worry on her face. I couldn't form enough coherent thought to speak and I could see my wide, glazed eyes reflected in her glasses.
So yeah, another fight scene coming up in the current chapter on the desktop. Will likely have this sent to the proofers sometime this afternoon, depending on how long I work on it before bed.
Taking all bets, taking all bets!
Okay that was epic I can't wait to see the full chapter
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If you want to see some more rough draft of that scene, go here.
Thanks
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Keep in mind that part is old and will be different due to the changes that took place in all the Sunlight one-offs, Cruising, and Raison.
I will keep that in mind
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Feel free to pm me questions or whatever.
*Squeals excitedly*