Review #36 - Goddammit Pinkie Pie, WWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOO, Sunset Shimmer is Replaced by a Screaming Man who's on Fire and Nobody Notices

And another three, they are:

Goddammit Pinkie Pie by kits
WWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOO by Branded Penguin
Sunset Shimmer is Replaced by a Screaming Man who's on Fire and Nobody Notices by Vertigo22

Goddammit Pinkie Pie by kits
(Comedy, Random, Romance, Slice of Life)
Goddammit Pinkie Pie - Twilight shows off her vocabulary
A Typical Day in Pwnyville - An everyday experience in the life of a rainbow-maned pegasus.
Pinkie is a Deep Sleeper - Twilight gets her hooves sticky by clopping on Pinkie Pie's entrance.

Review
Goddammit Pinkie Pie: Everyone swears. Seriously, that is all this is about.
A Typical Day In Pwnyville: I... I... This one broke my brain. (But beware, this is the romance chapter)
Pinkie is a Deep Sleeper: Twilight knocks on Pinkie's door to wake her up and gets her hooves sticky by something on the door.

This has fairly good pacing for the comedy that it is. And it has very few accidental errors within the text. It also is not planned out at all, but that is ok because this story was meant to be random stupid-ness. The tags fit well too.

Score: 9/10 recommendation: Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: This is actually very, very funny, just also has a lot of language.

WWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOO by Branded Penguin
(Comedy, Random)
Twilight Sparkle is replaced by a firetruck.

Review
Twilight gets replaced by a firetruck. These are the chronicles of that firetruck.

This has wonderful pacing. quite like "Princess Celestia is Replaced by an Ohio-class Submarine" level pacing. It has very few errors in it, which is nice. And it seems mostly planned out, with the filler being comedic. The tags work well, but it could maybe use an "Alternate Universe" tag.

Score: 9/10 Recommendation: Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: This is a great story, and you should go read it.

Sunset Shimmer is Replaced by a Screaming Man who's on Fire and Nobody Notices by Vertigo22
(Comedy, Equestria Girls, Random)
Sunset Shimmer is replaced by someone who's on fire.

Review
Sunset Shimmer is replaced by a screaming, burning man and no one notices.

This has great pacing, though it can get to feel a little long. It has very few errors within the text, which helps it out. And it also seems extremely planned out and is still quite comedic. The tags fit well too.

Score: 8/10 Recommendation: Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Beware of language. Oh, and this one wins longest title so far.

Comments

[Vertigo22]

Longest title, eh? Eh, I can make it longer.

Sunset Shimmer is Replaced Again by a Screaming Man who's on Fire and Nobody Notices Except for The Reader who's an Omnipresent Entity From Neptune's Moon Triton

Seriously though: I'm extremely happy you liked the story. Also: my first review from a blog. I'm stupidity ecstatic.

[Loganberry]

I have a feeling you may want to review some of Super Trampoline's fics one of these days...

[Matthewl419]

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What about, Sunset Shimmer is Replaced by a Screaming Man Who's on Fire and Nobody Notices Except for Pinkie Pie Who Thinks It's a Game so She Lights All Her Friends on Fire and Joins Him in the Screaming

First review from a blog... Now I feel special

[kits]

But beware, this is the romance chapter

I actually laughed out loud at this. Then had to spend 6 minutes explaining to my wife why it was funny.