Review #15 - Buggy Vanity, My Brother-The Tooth, Twilight Sparkle Lays An Egg

Alright, this should be the last one with Rambling Writer for awhile... I hope...

Buggy Vanity by Rambling Writer
My Brother, The Tooth by Georg
Twilight Sparkle Lays An Egg by Georg

Buggy Vanity by Rambling Writer
(Comedy, Slice of Life
The changelings never asked to metamorphose into completely new bodies, but it happened anyway, and they will never change back to what they were. For some, this is one of the most horrific things to happen to their species. For others, it's one of the most awesome.

Review
Some of the Changelings don't like their new form, they talk about it with others.

This story can feel a little bit long for the topic of it, but otherwise the pacing is fairly good. It has few errors in the text, which is normal for Rambling Writer. It does not feel completely planned out, though, and this time it doesn't work for the story. But the tags work well.

Score: 7/10 Recommendation: Read it if you have time, but no special trips.

Personal Thoughts: Pretty good changeling story, but quite so good that you need to read it now.

My Brother, The Tooth by Georg
(Comedy)
Shining Armor is a tooth. Really. Princess Luna say so.

Review
Princess Luna convinces Twilight that all the Royal Guard are grown from dragon teeth.

This story is excellently paced, the intro is perfect, the reveal, and the ending is great. It has very few errors in the text, which just adds to the experience. And it seems planned out, and yet not planned which somehow works for it. And the "Comedy" tag doesn't do it justice, it needs a "Crazy Hilarious" tag.

Score: 9/10 Recommendation: Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: Go and read it... seriously... right now.

Twilight Sparkle Lays An Egg by Georg
(Comedy, Drama)
{This is a continuation of the My Brother, The Tooth universe}
Princess Twilight Sparkle discovers a fact about alicorn reproduction she never expected. So do the other princesses.

Review
Twilight wakes up to find an egg in her bed. She tries to keep it alive as the life slips out of it. Cadance shows up to Celestia's and Luna's get-together and wonders where Twilight is. Spike comes do, starts talking to them, and we find out it is a prank by Luna and Celestia. Twilight borrows the others power for a bit and creates life.

This story has simply amazing pacing, it is just perfect. It has very few errors in the text, which really add to the experience. And it feels very planned out. The tags fit nicely as well.

Score: 9.5/10 Recommendation: Highly Recommended.

Personal Thoughts: The second you get done reading "MY Brother, The Tooth," read this one... it is amazing.