• Member Since 19th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen 3 hours ago

Very Sleepy


I am never serious.

More Blog Posts41

  • 79 weeks
    New Smut Story is out! But not MLP related!

    In honor of Nonstop Nutting November, and for the first time ever, I've recently gained a bit of inspiration to branch out a little and write some porn of another fandom I follow, that being RWBY. Fell in love with the action Monty Oum animated and still follow the show, seeming to be one of the few people who really got what they should look like. But before I was even into the show, I

    Read More

    2 comments · 1,068 views
  • 98 weeks
    How many of you are reading vs listening?

    Continuing the funny trend of the bronies having the best designed fan fiction site ever (Hentai Foundry looks like it made in the 90s, and don't get me started on Ao3 train wreck) some of you may have noticed stories here on Fimfiction have the option to be read by a text-to-speech function. I use it a bit myself, since it's nice to play a story then alt-tab and do something else while you

    Read More

    7 comments · 357 views
  • 120 weeks
    Same Sex Polygamy Relationships

    Full disclosure here, I've been sorta obsessed with thinking up my own original story for the past few years. It's not MLP or porn related, it's more centered around the "fighting" type of action, along with a focus on comedy and character progression. Just something to motivate me into creating something professional... Crafting real characters, making an interesting, meaningful and realistic

    Read More

    3 comments · 383 views
  • 141 weeks
    Ever wonder how modern TV audiences would react to average kinks we see here?

    I keep thinking back to how big a deal everyone thought it was in Game of Throne when they reveal... *gasp*... a brother and sister having sex together! And they're in love too? Oh my god!

    That was it. Just a simple incest pairing. Pretty vanilla by clop standards that would have been done in erotic fan fiction if not on the show itself.

    Read More

    7 comments · 459 views
  • 153 weeks
    Story Idea: The Disaster of Stable 69 (And 68)

    Doing a new thing here where I give a little summary of a clopfic idea I've had in the past but never got around to writing to see if anyone would have been interested in it.

    Read More

    6 comments · 350 views
Oct
2nd
2016

Random Blog Post About an Offensive Kink · 4:29am Oct 2nd, 2016

Alright, right off the bat, this blog doesn't have anything to do with "A Changeling Invasion" but it's mostly for the people who find that fic appealing. Maybe even for the people who like Twilight's Nude Party. I mostly just wanted to chat with you guys and didn't want to wait until I post chapters to do that.

What I wanted to talk about was 'sexism' or what I'll usually end up calling it in my fics, "extreme male dom". I've personally found this kink to be extremely enjoyable for some reason, and I know some other people do to. And just for the record out there, IRL I'm not a sexist pig who thinks all women should be in the kitchen or shouldn't drive. I only do this for porn purposes. I know some people are going to find sexism more deplorable than murder, but that just means this isn't for you. Anyway back on point, I would prefer to make sexism a main point in my stories because of this one reason: It is seriously the rarest kink out there...

I mean really. There are hundreds and thousands of written stories, or drawn art of rape, murder, monstergirl, incest, dom, sub, and a whole wide array of illegal stuff. I know it may not seem that rare to some, seeing as we have the Fall of Equestria series which takes it to a rather extreme point, but I have honestly not seen any hints of sexism elsewhere. I can only wonder why that is. To me, sexism is just an extension of domination, so you'd think it would be popular, mainly with guys.

But if you guys are really as interested in this kink as I am you should check out this one doujin (or w/e it's called) series by the name of "Victim Girls" by Fatalpulse. His stuff is extremely dark involving rape, breeding, treating women as cattle, and yes, sexism. He is really one of few other people I've found doing it. If anyone else has found luck finding it, I wouldn't mind hearing it.

Report Very Sleepy · 545 views · Story: A Changeling Invasion ·
Comments ( 16 )

Well I'm not gonna lie. I absolutely love a few sexist fics. Especially the FoE universe. But I also like it for some of the adventurous aspects. (Hell I even made my own Fall hero revenge type of FoE fic) So I do see where your coming from. In all honesty, you have made the best Impregnation fic I've read thus far. Only second to Game Of Estrus. The only reason I give your story flak is because I like it. So keep going.

I'm aware of Victim Girls, it's a bit over the top for me. I have this particular twist in the way my mind works. I can enjoy just about any sort of sexism abuse of the female protagonist, as long as in the end she turns the tables.

Used to really like the old Super Heroine stories by Mr X where Wonderwoman or Batgirl would be totally ravaged and abused, but in the last chapter they'd turn the tables and beat down the bad guys. And they'd be free, until the next time.

These days the theme seems to be the total subjugation and destruction of the protagonists personality and mind so that in the end she's just a mindless cock sleeve. I'm not fond of that.

I think that just like in case of the distinction between rape and rape play, one also needs draw a distinction between sexism and sexism play. For example, as I see it, sexist insults play a huge role in heterosexual verbal humiliation play, whether it's maledom or femdom, and it's even almost unavoidable. As long as both partners are consenting and are aware that it's just a scene, I don't see why that would be an issue.

Stories like Fall of Equestria are of course similar because in the end they are only fiction. There is one other aspect to take into consideration though. In-universe, what the characters do to each other isn't just sexism play, it's actual sexism, and this dichotomy itself can be used to slip in political agendas into seemingly harmless porn. In case of Fall of Equestria, some of the authors (e.g. DocMadfox) have explicitly distanced themselves from any political implications, and if that's the case, I don't have an issue with it. As a matter of fact, I enjoy this kind of fantasy myself. But non_creepy_nickname and possibly also Twipet (although probably to a lesser extent) actually seem to hold Red Pill-esque views, and I think it shows in Twipet's works and in how she writes female characters. It also clearly shows in the way non_creepy_nickname reacts to FoE-related material that goes against his own intentions for the setting (like for example anything involving Post-Fall themes, criticism of caribou ideology, femdom, or characters of ambiguous gender).

Porn can be used for propaganda, and I think one should be aware of that. I'm not saying that this is necessarily the case with Fall of Equestria (after all, that setting is done by a bunch of authors with very different outlooks towards it, even if you ignore non-canon authors), but it's definitely within the realm of the possible. But if one is aware of that possibility, I think there's nothing wrong with enjoying a little fantasy.

Comment posted by EmperorOfDarkness deleted Oct 2nd, 2016

4236462
Honestly, I've had more problems with folks who argue you can't write stories like FoE at all and not carry the same political beliefs, deep in your heart, even if you don't know it; since anyone who would want to write FoE must—must!—be brain-damaged in some way and therefore unable to distinguish between fiction and reality. I mean, what do you say to that? If I were he, at that point, I'd probably be too pissed off to deal with all the other criticism too. It's not the right approach, but it's human.

Or that other guy who claimed liking mind-control and fetishy stuff automatically means you can't have a degree in English because... what, you're too stupid? I don't even know. At some point, arguing simply becomes futile.

I think we're both in the boat of wishing for a greater mutual discourse, as long as it's useful. Shutting everything out isn't useful, neither is the hostility explained above. Especially when it's applied selectively, as those folks are often wont to.

Anyhow, last thing I heard, maledom/femsub is actually one of the most widespread kinks out there. Among both genders.

There's also Frocto with a heavy focus on maledom but he has a particular purple prose style which fits very well with the hentai tropes. Sometimes a bit too much.

That said I seem to like this fetish and I don't really know why, I'm a stereotypical nice guy irl (inb4 that explains it).

4236790

Honestly, I've had more problems with folks who argue you can't write stories like FoE at all and not carry the same political beliefs, deep in your heart, even if you don't know it; since anyone who would want to write FoE must—must!—be brain-damaged in some way and therefore unable to distinguish between fiction and reality.

I'm not sure if it's even worth arguing over what's worse: Using porn for propaganda and shutting out dissent, or being an SJW who believes that every kink immediately translates into a political or moral position. If you ask me, these two things are equally bad. I even wonder if there isn't a connection between the two.

Anyhow, last thing I heard, maledom/femsub is actually one of the most widespread kinks out there. Among both genders.

Not sure if it's the most widespread, but my impression within the kink community is that it's at least more common than femdom/malesub. I know a few male subs who have real difficulty finding a dominant woman.

4237068
Point. Didn't a wise person once argue comparing degrees of badness isn't necessarily useful? :trollestia:

Well, either way, none of Very Sleepy's stories looked like propaganda to me. There's an emphasis on maledom, sure, but seeing a political agenda there, I believe, is for those folks looking to be triggered. That's like thinking authors or feeding stories secretly want to fatten the populace.

Not sure if it's the most widespread, but my impression within the kink community is that it's at least more common than femdom/malesub. I know a few male subs who have real difficulty finding a dominant woman.

You worded it better than I did! Yeah, the numbers are tilted in that direction from what I know.

4237080

Well, either way, none of Very Sleepy's stories looked like propaganda to me.

I haven't looked into them too deeply yet, but from what I've seen so far, I'd also say they clearly aren't.

I guess I am rather picky with this kink. I do not find Fall of equestria very appealing in the kinky way. I mostly read it for the conflict and the struggle. I like dark stories, using sex and oppression instead of war and gore works very well in my opinion. I do not find FoE appealing because it is unwilling and "wishful thinking". The idea that females are inferior to males in FoE is based on beliefs. Thats why there is a invasion and consequently a resistance. The females do not want to be enslaved (or at least the majority don't) and so the caribou has to use propaganda, torture and other ways to force there world view on them. A potentially good story but for me, not my kink. Schorl Tourmalines fic "Fall of Equestria: Bruised Apples" is a great example of what I wanted from a FoE story.

What I like is if the superiority is "true", dirty little secrets story "How to Take Care of Your Mare" is the prefect example. The "superiority" is not evil in that world, it is just how the world works and everyone is happy.

Your story is a combo of conflict and "true" male superiority. The mares were submissive by nature (with exceptions of course). But there was still a conflict and that made it into a great story.

To clarify: I do not like rape. With power comes responsibility is my kink.

Another story a bit like your own is Trick Questions fic "Twilight's Secret Journal". I do not what to spoil anything because the story is just that good.

Meh. I like what I like. Don't approve? Go fuck yourself. I gave at the office.

4237080

Oh no. Don't get me wrong, all of my stories are sexist propaganda. My end game goal being to clear the dating field and be the only acceptable bachelor on the prowl.

But really, I'm not sure what someone would achieve by lacing his story with stuff to make guys act more sexist towards women. Even if women were exactly like how I portrayed them in my stories, you aren't going to get anywhere if you're acting like a sexist pig with them.

4236991
I'm a fan of Frocto and his seemingly endless supply of adjectives. The first chapter of The Pink Circle fic was probably one of the most amazing things I've ever read. Even though I would have preferred less of the cucking thing and more of the sex, I still come back to read it over and over.

4237356
Thanks. I can't promise I won't write any rape scenes in my next Zebra fic, but I will try to not make them as 'dark' as typical rape fics.

4237642

But really, I'm not sure what someone would achieve by lacing his story with stuff to make guys act more sexist towards women. Even if women were exactly like how I portrayed them in my stories, you aren't going to get anywhere if you're acting like a sexist pig with them.

I'm not even sure how one would go ahead about that, other than outright telling one's readers "Be a douche!" Never mind writing things so on the nose is more likely to push readers away than anything.

Even though I would have preferred less of the cucking thing and more of the sex, I still come back to read it over and over.

Word! That, and maybe a bit less character-shilling for Klein.

Thanks. I can't promise I won't write any rape scenes in my next Zebra fic, but I will try to not make them as 'dark' as typical rape fics.

Soooo...
/cough
Any way to maybe get a hint at what kinks that may contain? Maybe in spoilers? Personally, I'm hoping for mind control/brainwashing of some kind, lots of bondage, humiliation, and beastie fun for good measure. That would be so good...

4237685 I haven't really made up my mind yet. There's so many ways I could see the story being taken once Twilight encounters the Zebra mainland. Most of the ideas I seem to be coming up with don't seem to commonly written at least. But most of my ideas are coming from when the rest of Equestria gets involved. The basic theme being the mares are a little less eager to become sex slaves, compared to my changeling story, and the stallions are going to be a little less willing to take no for an answer. They then resort to a whole bunch of dirtier tricks to get the women on their knees.

I do want to use actual mind control, but not using it in a way that seems to force enslavement on mares and replaces their personalities with mindless sex zombies.

Sex Zombies being, of course, one of my old discarded ideas of a zombie virus sweeping over the lands as an STD by rape hungry ponies.

I recommend, for your zebra story, is for the zebra stallions to use a magic charm on mares to subtly make them submit to them. A mild form of mind control that makes the mares think their actions are their own.

4238238
4238036
I'm very much with EoPD on this. Also, I can see how the part about when it comes to Equestria itself is the truly interesting one; if Twilight is alone during her time in Zebrica, I wonder how the pony stallions will come to embrace the zebras' ideology.

Login or register to comment