A preview of the chapter · 12:38am Sep 1st, 2016
Just to show that i am working hard...
A small little preview, two actually.
Cadence sat in her throne, looking at her husband with a smile. Shining Armor looked up and patted his wife's hand and returned a reassuring smile on his own, "Don't worry hun, this party will go off without a hitch. I promise no surprises."
"PResenting, Queen Terra!" shouted a ellow pegasus as he stepped into the throne, a tall green alcorn with a flwing brown manefloating behind her.
"Queen Tertra? but she has been missing for millenia," Cadence said.
"Aw, princess, don't tell me that its become that easy to see through my disguise," chuckled the alicorn as green flames began to surround her, changing her body. In the place of the regl alicorn was a black bug mare. Her chitlin hide glimmering in the light of the empire as her limp blue mane hung along her face. Steeping forward, the holes in her legs gave some of the guards b ehind her a view of the royals as they stared at the arrival in shock.
"Chrysalis"
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"Rhymey, my son," smiled Harry, "What brings you back home?"
"Oh, just want to tell you father of my plans...to get my life back."
So Rhymey's folks aren't going to talk in rhyme, then? Is that because they're not trying to pull mind control on one another?
And I wonder how Chrysalis got out of prison.
Darn it, why didn't I realize this blog was a thing sooner? This is intriguing.
I really hope you'll correct all those errors I can see.