News & Updates · 6:05pm Jul 6th, 2016
Sorry I haven't been around mush this week, I've had to go to several different doctors with my brother as well as a lot of other stuff going such as the holiday weekend and this entire week has just been super crazy. It is still going to be crazy until the middle of next week when I should have the next 2 chapters posted.
I also have a new editor who writes fanfictions, just not MLP, and since I know them in real life it will just be really easy to have them do it. Just hope it goes better than the other person I was going to have do it in real life before the decided not to.
And lastly, the following contains potential spoilers but let's you give input on the different endings the story may have. Depending on the ending, there will be a sequel or sequels, though I won't say which ones do so it won't influence any comments.
Ending 1: Sunset stays in the human world and Twilight goes back to Equestria, though she may or may not forgive the others. If she does forgive, she won't forget and they will have a lot of work to make things right between them.
Ending 2: Sunset and Twilight both stay in the EG world.
Ending 3: Sunset, Twilight and Moonie all go back to Equestria.
To be honest all three sounds like good endings making it difficult to decide on an outcome since all of them are valid.
While this story is still on my to read list. my personal head cannon is Sunset belongs in the human world, as she has made ties to it. weather this applies to your story has yet to be seen by me so i cannot really say one way or another how your story should end.
I kind of like ending 2
I'd like the second ending
I'd say ending 2 or 3, leaning more towards 2.
I prefer the third ending. I think the mane 5 and Celestia should make ammends, Also it is where Twilight and Sunset belong.
All the endings are great.. But ending 2 I guess.
While I like the sound of all three, endings one and three have the greatest potential for character development. Maybe a mix of those? They both go back, but Twilight struggles with forgiving her friends, and Sunset struggles with reconciling and helping her daughter adjust to being a pony. Hm. Well I like ending one but I want Twilight and Sunset to stay in contact... Perhaps ending one, but it's a trial and if Twilight's still unhappy she goes back to EG to stay with Sunset? Yeah, that sounds cool.
While all three seem good and likely, the first one is the one that does the least for me. It strikes me as leaving Sunset kind of out in the cold in regards to her past. Endings two and three seem like the best to bring closure.
While Ending 3 is my personal preference, Sunset has created several important personal connections in the human world.
Sunset most certainly should return to Equestria to resolve her relationship with Celestia and present Moonie, but Sunset will also have to return to the Human world to resolve the issues there. Namely Peach, Trixie and any other lingering commitments.
I see her spending the majority of her time in the human world at least until Peach passes away...
... unless Peach ventures into Equestria...
TL;DR: Ending 3 once Ending 1 is resolved.
I could go with one or two mostly since sunset has a life in the human world and i don't see her just having her and her daughter just up and leave since her daughter wold have to get acclimated as a pony.
I like Ending 3 the most. Twilight needs to deal with her friends, and I like Bacon Pony.
Hmm, I'm guessing the portal was open naturally when Twilight fell through, so that means she's stuck there for two years anyways. I could see her getting attached to this new world. That being said, she does need to go back to confront her demons at some point. Or they could come to her. Either way works. Overall, when the portal opens, she needs to weigh what she has gained in the Human world versus what she could go back to in Equestria (possible royal title, etc).
As for Sunset, she would need to consider the positives and negatives to moving. At this point, her only real bonds are to Mrs Cake and Peach. Would she be willing to leave them? If anything, I think she's carved out her own part of the human world and has no reason to go back. It seems like Celestia should be apologizing to her instead of the other way around.
I like number 1 the most, mostly because I don't want Sunset's kid to get uprooted from her entire world, and because of the obviously positive impact Sunset is having on the human world. The human world needs a pony perspective!
But also, I don't want Twilight and the ponies who care about her to be cut off from each other. They all may not deserve closure, but they definitely need it.
I prefer the third ending.
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Thank you everyone, I don't want to say which ending will happen as of yet, but I am taking everyone's thoughts and opinions into consideration as I work out the ending.
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