I'm Your Villain News and Whatnot · 6:37pm Jul 3rd, 2016
Heyo, everyone!
Just wanted to give a quick status update regarding the state of the Starlight and Spike story, I'm your Villain .
It's been a couple weeks since Seventh Heaven and I released it, and it's doing really well! So, first off, thanks to everyone who checked it out! Whether you liked or hated it, taking the time to check it out means a lot to us both.
Anyway, as far as updates go, Seven and I are working out some writing time as we speak to continue on with it. With any luck, we'll have a new chapter by mid-week, or Friday at the latest. (That's the goal at least.)
Now, if you could, tell me what kind of stuff you thinks gonna happen in the next chapter! Will everything go great at the gala? Or will fate play it's hand and screw everyone over?
I'd like to hear your guys' thoughts, and w e can't wait to get this thing updated for you all!
Keep rockin'!
Yeah, I'm interested to see how this story goes as I think I might be right in saying this is the first non platonic Starlight/Spike ship.
I think they will hit it off pretty well....Until Rainbow Dash starts teasing them.
I want them to kiss :3
My thoughts?
Until you shoehorn Cheerilee in and make her the main character of the story, I'll only be able to give your story a perfect 5/7.
I kind of wanted to see more of the two sharing an intimate reflection on their lives, but that's already been done in the very first chapter along with setting the stage for possible romance. Honestly I think it could have ended with Starlight giving Spike a kiss, saying "Thank you," and them attending the Gala together.
Sometimes stories can go wonderfully without a hitch and the ending be sweet as sugar, maybe they bond over what they have in common? As for introducing more conflict, perhaps the "different species" argument could be used, but I think those grounds for conflict may be a bit stale by this point so I don't know what exactly could be used here.
In any case I look forward to seeing what does happen!
SMOOZE
Monday night, bro. I got Tuesday through Thursday off work.
4066053 I've got Tuesday off, so boom!
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