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ASGeek2012


Late-blooming fan with way too many story ideas in his head. Have written before, but this is my first serious foray into the world of fan-fiction.

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May
29th
2016

Will be doing some reediting of my story · 10:33pm May 29th, 2016

Based on recent critical feedback of my story Second Chances, Many Changes, once I post Chapter 35 (so I don't leave readers in suspense as to what happens next), I will be pausing to do some re-editing of the previous couple of chapters to address some issues noted in the changeling subplot. Normally I don't do rewrites in the middle of posting a story, but where I believe I can do this without altering the plot, I'd like to take the time now to do this.

Readers currently following the story will not have to go back and re-read the edited chapters (though I would not mind if those who did leave criticism took a look to see if it's improved any). If this affects my posting schedule, I'll make another post about it (though I doubt the delay would be more than a day or two).

I am extremely thankful to those who took the time to point out the flaws in the story rather than simply do a downvote-and-run. Comments are far more useful to me than votes.

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Comments ( 3 )

Honestly I didn't see anything wrong.

Cant wait to see how it all goes

As long as you really feel that your story could do with improvements, based on the critique you received, go ahead. Don't do anything to specifically please those who gave criticism though, that's the fastest way to kill your motivation.
Your story is great, don't forget that.

3982286 I'll second that.

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