Who Wants to Contribute?! · 6:14am May 4th, 2016
WARNING: IF YOU'RE NOT CAUGHT UP WITH LAST OF MY KIND DON'T READ!
So I'm running dry on things to do for Last of My Kind.
I won't lie when I say that after Chloe meets Reynolds and her clone/daughter, I had no other plans. Ever since starting the story I have had that as my main target point. Though I do have an idea for the story's ending, I don't want to go ahead and rush right to it.
So I'm thinking of possibly writing a few slice of life/filler chapters in between plot chapters.
So I want to know if you guys would have any suggestions. They can be potential romance ideas, silly chapters, sad chapters, any idea! Hell, it could be Chloe finally meeting the rest of the mane 6, I just need suggestions that can get my juices flowing again. If you can come up with anything, please share!
I think it would be good to see Chloe settling into her new life amongst the ponies, as well as see their reaction to her (not to mention the truth of their origins! That will be interesting if word starts to spread!). And possibly see her get some help. Those trips into insanity can't be healthy. But understandable. She's been through some very traumatic experiences. And then frozen for over 10,000 years.
Finding Luna's long lost son by Sombra.
Perhaps a silly chapter where Chloes convinces Twilight to take her to the Equestria Girls universe, only to have her one attempt at finding a place among new humans end with a ponified result.
some interactions with her daughter? Perhaps getting to know her better and trying to be the mother her daughter (presumably) wants her to be?
P.S. This could also work out as a secondary conflict in the story with Chloe struggling with the very concept let alone actually being a mother.
I think this would add a really awesome aspect to the story, like a conflict where shes trying to come to terms with very suddenly being a mother but then ends up loving it anyway and having a bunch of awesome mother-daughter scenes
(I just love mother-daughter cute scenes and think it would be cool to at least see at least a little bit of that in the story
Another one I can think of is her coming to terms with ponies as a whole? Her mental condition aside for the moment, I would love to see some kind of relationship between her and the pony version of her late girlfriend that died in the vault.
Obviously this would have to be a bit later because she would have to get over her first in order to move on, not to mention the mental condition and the whole xenophilia thing with it being a whole different species and all.
Further more meeting the rest of the main 6 is definitely not a bad idea
This is super out there but maybe she gets to talk to eva somehow? Like maybe Celestia or Luna gives her the chance to see/talk to her one last time? Properly closing that whole thing for Chloe and giving her some form of closure? This would be pretty cool I think. Also it would give Chloe another good emotional scene in the story.
*sigh* I love contributing (Don't be afraid to PM me if you have any questions or anything, I like helping writers :D)
I would like to see one chapter where Chloe and her daughter have a moment of bonding together, perhaps just having a day watching the world go by. Nothing intense, but just a mother and a daughter getting to know each other simply by being.
3918010 Yes, I would like that too.
See the reactions of other ponies. The press finding out about Chloe. Getting a place to live and settling in. Finding out how things are done in Equestria. Haggling at the market, avoid Hay-Products. Maybe finding a job. Twilight grilling her with questions about the past and technical stuff. Already mentioned: Interaction with her daughter.
Learning the ropes, Maybe exploring her interactions with Magic more. There is a lot to do there, I also think Meeting the rest of the mane six would be appropriate. I mean, She doesn't have to interact with them Heavily but she's already met dash and Twi, and she's gotta have a pinkie pie welcome party... (And SO MANY BIRTHDAYS)
And a date night with quartz. But make it Awkward and cute, Like, Neither of them have any idea what to actually do for a date Or Chloe does but not with a pony and Quartz does but not with a Human and they spend the whole night second guessing themselves until one of them says the Right wrong thing and it all comes out in a laugh and some sweetness.
And as So many have said, more stuff with her daughter, Obviously dealing with her fractured psyche, Maybe Getting a house/settling in somewhere. The robot in the ruins needs to be set free I imagine someone
could help with that.
Oh god, Rarity Needs to make her a dress XD Or any kind of Clothes really.
A finle moment with chloe and her dr friend/ husband on his death bed
Romance with small horse please. You've been teasing it long enough.
well... you could have them find the others, after that you kind ruined it with the alien metacloreien thing which is actually bacteria poop, you proboley should have them try and find out about the aliens and have her discover her powers
Romance you freakin nerd!
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You're always Mr/Ms. Negative aren't you?
Always hard to tell if you're enjoying the story or just reading it cause why the fuck not.
Well, what are Chloe's priorities right now? And what are the priorities of everyone else who knows about her?
I still really want to know what happened to the sun and moon. And I think there were a bunch more questions in my previous comments on the story that might be worth addressing.
There's so much left to learn about this world! Just... please make sure it stays close to Chloe and her perspective.
You could do an homage to all anime ever and have the classic fillers:
The "we need to raise money" episode.
The beach fan-service episode.
The silly-antics date episode.
The pet episode.
The festival episode.
The competitive sports and/or work-out episode.
Gosh I know there were more. It's been a while since those old animes.
3921070 im enjoying it, you just made it hard to do anything without alien gods coming down from the sky. what i was thinking was we whir going to find out that luna and celestia caused the out break and thy where going to fight.
I would like her to go around helping them with relics of humanity. I would be willing to bet the pyramids, the sphinx, parts of the Great Wall of China, and the American Interstate System. She should also find somepony to bond with romantically. As also mentioned her daughter/clone CMC shenanigans.