Chase update

The epic battle chapter has been thrashed. I was unhappy with how it turned out. It was entirely too focused upon one perspective (Ripple's) and just read poorly. I hated it. Other characters involved, their sections felt like a passing footnote. So the entire chapter, (About 4.5k words) has been scrapped and will be started over.

Thank you for your patience. I'm trying to tell a story here.

Comments

[PizzaBoi]

's all good, bro

[Seratina]

You know what they say! Quantity over I mean QUALITY OVER QUANTITY!

[TheBruteKiller]

3887953 Really? I thought when it was Kudz it was Quantity and Quality over sleep?

[kudzuhaiku]

3888065

SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK!

[Seratina]

3888066 What about Quantlity over quantity OR quality?

[RadicalDishonesty]

As much as I'm not reading The Chase right now (anymore?) it's interesting to hear that you're rethinking a chapter.

[kudzuhaiku]

3888574

Oh, this happens more often than you think.

[RadicalDishonesty]

3888583
Well. Rethinking after posting, then.

I guess saying it without qualifications could be misrepresenting your writing processes as a lack of foresight, and that would be wrong, since I know you spend a lot of time planning like crazy.

[cogwheelbrain]

This is acceptable to me.

...not that that really matters.

[Sigmacipher]

You know at this point your not writing a story...you're writing the Illiad with the war being waged against God and the devil.

And bucky is spawn.

And Celestia is pretty much the old angle dude that took spawn's big Boss crown.

Did I ever mention that was a bad move.