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First off, for those wondering, i am going to redo dinky and carrot's time before they were caught, give them a bit more bonding time.

Also, i want a vote: Would you all rather i return Living Nightmare to the way it was before the Season 5-including rewrite (whilst keeping some of the more enjoyed newer scenes, like Blueblood and Stellar in the dreamscape), or leave it as is?

Let me know in the comments

Comments

[Zen-Aku]

Leave the living nightmare the way it is ithink it is good

[GIGA-XISBASS]

Leave it like it is.

[Carolusrex1]

I'd rather see you pick up on The Princess and the Foals again.

[The Spy of the Tiger]

I think it was better pre season 5, but then again now I've only read like 3 chapters from the rewrite. Not that it has anything to do with you, but I literally have 34 pages of unread stories in my favorites list. Also, any idea when you'll go back to working on some of your other incomplete stories?

[harts fire]

as to dinky and carrot's I think it is good but a little back story would be nice. and than as it stands it is open for any author to pick up that line and run with it, hum does this sound familiar AB?

now as to your question about Living Nightmare I will answer this with a little story about my self.
I am a 52 year old guy and I am proud to say I was tough to cook a few things from bye grandmother one of the things I am vary proud of is my pie crust, now any one that has ever tried to make a real pie crust can tell you how hard it is to get right and at the same time I can tell you with out a dought what you are doing wrong.
gran always told me one thing you have 4 minuets to mix it after that you are just messing up.
ok so if you have not guessed the answer at his point here it is in English.
get your fingers out of the batter it is good to go.
stop worrying about things please before you end up messing it up.

Harts Fire