Can I write comedy?

Or am I cursed with a unfunny bone?

Usually when I write, my comedy is more subtle and not so much of a LAUGH OUT LOUD but a good chuckle. But if any of you noticed, I went for an attempt at a LOL comedy style fic with Vinyl Scratch does a Crap Ton of Cocaine, and judging by the lack of attention and so on, maybe I'm just not cracked up for it? Sure, I got some funny comments and told bits I did right, but over all, was it lacking?

If I can't write that sort of comedy, well so be it, but I thought I'd give it a shot. So if anyone read it, give me your honest imput on it. Should I stick with my usual "sense" of comedy, or try more of these and see how I do?

Comments

[theRedBrony]

Vinyl Scratch does a Crap Ton of Cocaine, and judging by the lack of attention and so on, maybe I'm just not cracked up for it?

Well, at least that was funny!

For srs, comedy's hard.

[totallynotabrony]

I just wrote a story about crack that seems to have flopped. Is two datapoints enough?

[Tome Turner]

judging by the lack of attention

81 upvotes.
Some writers on this website wont ever reach that.

[Trick Question]

You have more than three thousand followers.

Many of your hits come from followers, and most of those followers "expect" a certain kind of story from you.

That may be all this means.

[Themaskedferret]

You regularly make me laugh in your writing fwiw. I'd say keep working at it and refine.

[ROBCakeran53]

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Well yeah, but I'm not going by the entirety of Fimfic, I'm focusing on my followers. Not trying to sound pretentious about it or anything, but I do have over 3k people keeping an eye on me, and so far only 81 of them have liked it. I was curious as to why, if most of my followers follow me for my style of stories/writing, or the genera's I write.

[Smiling Armor]

Well, that story is an M-rated story. Many people have the "View Mature" option turned off. :)

[Rush]

I thought it was hilarious. :D