New Story Incoming - I Have This Friend

Going back through my catalog of unfinished stories, I realized that I finished a story more than two months ago, and then neglected to ever ask anyone to edit it for me, and consequently, the story has been sitting unreleased on my hard drive.

I Have This Friend
Romance, Comedy
2,000 words

Twilight asks Celestia for romantic advice.

You know, for a friend.

If anyone would be interested in taking a look at it and making sure that it is constructed properly and help me edit it, I would really appreciate it. Also, if anyone has any advice about making the summary more awesome (or if they think that the summary is already good), that also would be appreciated.

Comments

[Not_A_Hat]

I think the summary is already pretty good.

If you want me to edit, hit me up on Skype, though I likely won't have time earlier than next Monday. Although you can likely find someone sooner, so... yeah. Your call.

[Corejo]

2000 words? I can tear that apart for you of you like.

[Foehn]

I'd be happy to take a look at it, if you're still looking for editors.

[bookplayer]

I'm guessing TwiLestia, so that's a big old NOPE from me.

If I'm off base, let me know.

[Nyronus]

That description sounds glorious.

[Pav Feira]

Not sure how late I'll be out this evening, but I'm pretty sure you have my Skype info. Hit me up and I'll ping you when I'm around.

[Spectral]

I think the summary is fine, if borderline ambiguous about whether or not it's TwiLestia we're getting. Anyway, I've got tons of spare time tomorrow, so hit me up if you need any more help.

[tehspeleengpolise]

Ye, I like the summary.

[Bad Horse]

You can send me a link & I'll read it. The title and summary are wonderful click-bait. Get a good picture.

[Questionable]

TD writes comedic Twilestia?

The summary is awesome already. Don't you dare change it!