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Brony Parasite


In weirdest day, in strangest night, no bad mood shall escape my sight, let those who cry in lonely spite, beware my shippings, Bronyparasite's might!

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  • 145 weeks
    Still Alive And "Hiring"

    So, I'm still alive, just been working on other stories on my second account. I found out I had ADHD which's caused me to try a number of meds that've done more harm then good, but I'm still standing and I still have passion. If not the proper focus.

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    5 comments · 415 views
  • 193 weeks
    Crusade

    I need you guys to give my friend and I support on a project of ours. We'll be updating it soon, and hopefully consistently. It's a Displaced war, but on a smaller scale. We've used the mistakes of the past to help us make this one truly special. It's mainly Warhammer 40k, but you don't need to know anything to follow along. I know I don't.

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    0 comments · 240 views
  • 240 weeks
    Updates

    So, I've begun editing the original chapters to fix some glaring issues that I've noticed. Plus, there are some... regrets here and there. Hopefully I can fix the biggest issues and remove all of the unneeded fluff.

    And don't worry, I'll also finish the next chapter by the time I'm done with all of the tweaks.

    0 comments · 358 views
  • 246 weeks
    IT'S UP!!!

    My new story Me, Myself And I has been published, please check it out! :pinkiehappy:

    https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448354/me-myself-and-i

    0 comments · 323 views
  • 246 weeks
    New Displaced Fic

    I've uploaded my first fic on Genocidal Pacifist. It was a pain to start, but it's on!



    Oh, and I will start back up on my other fics here.

    1 comments · 310 views
Oct
25th
2015

Remake or Rewrite? · 12:28am Oct 25th, 2015

I'm deciding on if I want to keep the original story and make a new one just better, or rewrite everything and try to forget my mistakes.

VOTE

Report Brony Parasite · 151 views · Story: You Are Inferior ·
Comments ( 16 )

I'd say that I would just edit it but in the end it's your choice

Personally, I'd request aid from the contributors. Some of them are willing to help out in situations like this. Though if I had to pick, I'd pick rewrite.

3494577 Contributors? Like what?

I'd pick just make a few edits, and keep it the same. If they deny it again, make it a Renegade displaced.

3494584 Contributors for the Displaced group. They are the ones doing quality control. Here's a link about story acceptance that should clear some things up. If not, I can give you a list of contributors. Also, I might be able to get you the reviews of your story so you can see what they see, if you don't already have them.

3494712 If they deny it they aren't saying they don't want the story in the group. They are just saying that it needs improvements.

3494787

Isn't that what Meesters for?:ajbemused: Not just anyone can submit a story to be posted on Fimfiction. It actually has to be good. It actually has to have decent grammar

3494797 I'm not going to argue that point and for the most part you are correct. Unfortunately, there's been a few slipping past that aren't up to the quality of what yours and mine are, at the very least. There have been plenty of stories in the group that have grammar issues that made the story bothersome to read. They admins just want to try to improve the group's image somehow and this wss their solution. Is it the ideal solution, nowhere close, but it's all they could think of.

Look, I get where you're coming from. Mine just barely passed itself. I would have dreaded going back and rewriting all of my chapters. Just give the admins some leeway while they try to improve the group's image. That's all I'm saying.

3494867 I see your point.

However, Meester has been the one to get my stories where they are today. If he hadn't been making sure they were up to standard, they might have been terrible. So, no matter what MidnightChaos says, I'm sticking with him and only him.

3494873 Hmm, is Meester your edito or a sys admin or both? Either way, just send me a pm asking me to review any of your new fics. I'm a contributor and can approve your fic. All you need is one more contributor and you're set. I can even get you a list of contributors.

3494887 :applejackconfused: Well then. Might as well.

I'm probably just paranoid... yeah, that's it....

Only remake.

3495767
From this position, I do not see much good. Especially after the princess has been threatened.

With how little there is to the story currently, either one would do; not much difference would be made in comparison to doing it, say, in the middle of the story. If you like what you've got, just edit it. If you want to take it a different direction from the start, then a rewrite is in order. I'm not too partial, I'd like to see it whichever way it goes.

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