It Is Coming! · 12:48pm Sep 9th, 2015
The time in which certain events happen will be placed before hand, sort of like a short time skip between each important part. All of it is in Tobias’s point of view.
Oh, and sorry for the wait. Please enjoy my final story.
Begin!
The Seventh Day
Part Two
8.17 AM – Celestia’s Chambers.
“I love you.”
Those three words, those three wonderful yet oh so terrible words. Oh how I wished I could ignore them, ignore the warmth that flooded my frail body as what she said, what they meant washed over me. I’d felt her love, all of it. I’d felt it fill me up to the brim and then overflow within, flooding not just on the inside but on the outside too.
How I wish I could just ignore this feeling, this distrust and…not quite hate, but close. How I wish I could just forget all that she did to wound me like she has, and only recall the good she’s done for me, to me…but I can’t can I, I’m just too fucking stubborn.
I loved her, LOVE her...but she betrayed me, poisoned me, and humiliated me. Almost every part of me wanted to forgive her, to understand her and stay with her for the rest of eternity. I saw her dream, the dream of a simple life, the dream of a wonderful, loving family. It’s a dream, but it’s a good dream. A dream I myself am not entirely against happening.
But I won't let it happen; I've played with staying and leaving, loving and hating this mare for what seems like forever. It's a story that refuses to conclude...but it will tonight. Because I'm going to fool this mare, I'm going to manipulate the manipulator with her own broken, twisted love for me. I don’t know how yet, but I WILL find my way out of her reach…no matter the cost.
I looked up at her, crippled, practically dying in this bed as she too looks into my eyes, awaiting a reply. A reply that I knew she needed oh so desperately to hear from me…a reply I would use as the first step towards freedom.
"I love you too," I replied, truthfully, completely and totally truthfully. The way her eyes light up with utter joy, utter love and adoration show the first victory of that day, the seventh day of a hellish paradise.
Her kiss, long and drawn out is returned as such in turn. And with a little luck…removing any doubt from Celestia’s mind that I don’t want to stay.
A part of me does want to stay, a large part. But what I feel...I won't let blind me to what she's done. It's a tiny part of me that wants this, the rest is yelling at me to stay with her forever.
...I can't, I won't. It’s all that’s left of who I was before she poisoned all of me, body with liquid and soul with her love.
I will break free from her. I'm going to escape tonight. I'm going to flee into the dark with nothing, and somehow, someway...I'm going to escape Equestria and find a place so far out of Celestia's grasp that even if she finds me, there's nothing she could do to take me back. And maybe…somehow, I will find a way to ignore the terrible ache in my heart when I look and see her smile.
10.02 AM – Celestia’s Chambers.
We had been cuddling together for near enough two hours, Celestia being on top of me the whole while…she was so warm, so light. Her incredibly large wings were splayed over my arms and legs, warming them with a remarkable comfort given they had pointy feathers. But her feathers were as soft as the rest of her; it really shouldn’t have surprised me as much as it did.
Okay…it’s time to move.
I turned my head slightly and looked at the mare atop me, a warm, happy smile on her beautiful face as she snored softly against my chin. It was almost enough to make me consider not waking her.
Almost.
But with a forced reflection on all she had done to hurt me, it was with only a moderate amount of effort that I carried through with my plan and woke her up…in a way that I knew would help towards my goal.
I gently extracted my right arm from her wing and placed it upon her back, rubbing it up and down in a way that could easily be realized as loving, as was the idea. But a step is more often than not followed by another, and so it was with reluctance that I leaned forward ever so slightly and kissed her on the lips. It didn’t happen right away, but as a few seconds ticked on by I felt the co ruler’s lips forming into a smile as she slowly kissed me back.
“Good morning honey,” she said warmly, the sheer depth of love in her voice more than enough to make me smile back. Celestia’s eyes soon became quite visible as she pulled back, lidded with all that I’d felt when I opened the second door in her mind. “I must say that I didn’t expect such a lovely wake up call, but I must also say that it was more than welcome.”
“I used to kiss you all the time when we woke up,” I replied, grinning of my own accord as she leaned down and we kissed again.
“True,” she admitted happily, shuffling as she repositioned herself into a little more comfortable position. “It just feels like an age since you kissed me with such open affection. It feels wonderful to have it again.”
Looking at her almost ecstatic expression, a thought found its way into my mind, my plan. It was thought I almost disregarded instantly, thinking it far too revealing of my nigh desperate intention for her to trust me completely. But as I thought on it some more…I wondered if perhaps it was just enough of a step in the right direction to accelerate my plan a little.
And thus…I went forward and carried it out.
“Do you remember the morning after I’d tripped and banged my head against your throne?” I asked, a coy smile worming its way onto my face at the confusion on Celestia’s.
“Yes, you worried me half to death when you didn’t get up,” she answered, an upset expression rapidly coming to pass. “Why would you ask me such a thing sweetie?”
“Well,” I began, shifting myself ever so slightly as I continued. “Do you remember when I woke up the next morning with you practically on top of me, and you wouldn’t stop fussing over me until I…did something?”
“What are you…” the way her frown morphed into an open smile was almost comical as she realized where I was going with my tale. “Well, yes I do. If I recall correctly then you soothed my fussing with a very forward…thrust.”
“Best morning sex we’d ever had.”
“Was it?”
“I think so.”
“Hmm, care to change that?”
“Maybe I do.”
The sultry grin on her face as she leaned down, the way she moved her body as it warmed up considerably, the way she manipulated her tail to touch and tease my own was far more than enough to…get me started, so to speak.
“Don’t worry baby,” she crooned lovingly, nibbling on a lobe ever so softly. “I’ll be really gentle.”
…
It was the definitely the best morning sex I could remember having.
ooooh nice.
This...this doesn't mean what I think it means, does it?
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Oh no.
My, oh my.
Wait, final story?
'Final story'
Dare I ask what this is about?
I had a gut feeling that you were gonna do something soon, didn't expect it was going to be the last thing you were gonna do.
wait, your not gonna leave are you ?
Final story?
Oh god,
Final story? Tired of being the one trick pony I see.
Shame, cause you are a geniunely good writer.
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Tired of writing ponies to be perfectly honest, doesn't mean I'm gonna switch up how I write my females.
What other stories are you writing. That don't have ponies
Then this site will be down one superbly good writer. Audios fair Zamairiac may your days be dank.
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/soulsacrifice/images/a/a6/Big-Boss-Salute-720x408.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130424041648 A premature sayonara but I'd rather say it now than be unable to say it because I missed the actual fair well blog post.
That said, I'm more than ready to strap into this final story.
Damn. Well what of the status A Bug's Love, A Mother's Obsession. or was it canned without me knowing it?
3380432
Well, despite my opinions on how you write your fics/how you portray your characters, I wish you the best of luck elsewhere.
3380867
Thanks, honestly writing for me only began as a little hobby. I started with Digimon of all things and progressed from there. It was nice to see how popular I became and I'm truly touched by all that have followed me these past couple of years, but time moves on as do I.
FIM has lost its flare (in my opinion), here's me moving onto other things. Maybe Legend of Korra...with a very Zamairiac version of the Avatar
...And I went off somewhere, thank you for the comment :)
omg
I cant wait
Hey I love all your stories, sorry to see you leave, but where can we find your non pony stories when you start writing them? Like you mentioned Legend of Korra a series I love as well as the original Avatar.
Will you post links to your new stories when you write them?
And are you going to stop your unfinished fics?
3380912 I can respect your decision to move on and while I just discovered your stories, (literally talking about 1 month) you have made a considerable impact on what I enjoy in fiction. Before I read The Alicorn Instinct I hated yandere. But you made it work for me. Have a derpy.