I can't believe I'm doing this · 4:59am Jul 31st, 2012
I must be crazy.
I had an idea for a large one shot clop fic, and I'm considering writing it after I update SaHSLL and Weekend. I could wait till those two are done, but that's a unknown amount of time. So I'm leaving it to you the people it affects the most, my readers. I'm going to explain in a small summary, basically the long description, and you are going to vote yes or no on if I should add this to my list of things to write in the near future or hold off till I'm done with other stuff. So here it goes.
Humanized Spike (will retain certain dragon aspects same with the girls) has just turned 18. He asks Pinkie to throw him a small party with just him and the girls. When it start getting dark Pinkie suggest a new party game she's just heard about, The Punishment Game. Everyone's a little skeptical, but Pinkie explains that it's basically truth or dare without the truth part, and that if you fail to complete the dare you have to do a punishment as decided by the darer. The game starts out innocent enough with silly dares and silly punishments, but things soon take a turn for the kinky as Pinkie shows her true intentions.
Fun, huh? This has until I update Weekend to be decided.
Also if anyone with artistic talent could do me a huge favor and make a drawing of my OC Wrath I would be most grateful. Feel free to PM me if interested or you have a question about drawing him.
Oh, and time for a shameless self promotion 30 Minute Sparity is currently awaiting approval for submission. It's all SFW short Sparity fics written by, you guessed it, me!
P.S. Ven that thing I'm sending will be tomorrow as I wanna go over it again when I'm more awake and less not.
sounds intresting
Fuck yeah do it and i better see some Spike and Rarity come out of this or I am going to have to kill a pony. and the updates good im dying over here i need them bad
All my yes to the oneshot.
Okay, I will not be editor for this.
Sorry, BDSM is something I know jack shit about. It doesn't turn me on. Sorry.
I'm for it.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png
Sure!
260930 That's not quiet what I was going for there. Although since this will be more clop less plot Ven seems to be the go to.
Everything I write is BDSM to an extent. I think you are referring to bondage which is a branch of BDSM.
"Humanized Spike (will retain certain dragon aspects same with the girls) "
I'm a bit confused here so they are going to be anthro?
260926 Spike the one male in a group of hot babes. I think it goes without saying this will be by the end a massive orgy with Spike as the man to be.
260948 Thats all I ask for
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260947 Think Pegasi wings and horns for the Unicorns, normal chicks for A.J. and Pinkie (well as nomral as Pinkie can get at least). Spike will have fangs, slited eyes, and I'm still deciding on wings and claws. So kind of a mix between human and anthro.
260956
Oh, welp my friend I'm afraid I won't be reading this one sadly. Not a fan of humanizing ponies, and I'm barely on the fence when it comes to anthros.
260965 Fair enough. Either way it completes my list of bodies ponies can be in.
260970
I wish yea luck, and let your writing.... dammit I had a awesome saying and than lost it just like that......
I CAN DO ALL THE ART! ALSO I LIKE THIS IDEA.
261004 It's like watching someone shoot themselves in the leg. Which is funny, cause usually i'm the one doing the leg shooting. Still, if you really wanna take a shoot at some illustrations, music that kind of exemplifies Wrath would be this. Inspiration is something I find useful.
I also like this idea.
261016 I'll have some sorta sketch thingy sometime soon. So yeah. o_o
261048 I look forward to it. Thanks for taking this on.
Roger roger Mr.Cloud!
I know I'll definitely read it if it comes out, it sounds beyond awesome.
This does sound interesting, but again, I'm waiting for the next SahSLL. It's been too long since it's been updated. I don't care if the Olympics are playing or something, I must see how this all continues and how Spike lives happily ever after with all six mares.
261630 Yea the next chapter is mind blowingly good.
261632 So post it!
....Uh, if that's okay. 
260939
Yeah... when it is near even... I am good with that. If not... well, yeah.
You can see where I am going with this.
You're going to make Spike a Dovahkiin?
I'm down.
261716 Well if it makes you feel better. I'v added 1000 words to the first chapter and still have 1 scene left to go. The updated version of chapter 1 should be out tonight.
261725 Near even? Also you do know Applejack got tied up in the first chapter of SaHSLL right?
261730
The little stuff, I can handle. Spanking pushes it. Toys? No. Full-on... nuh-uh. No way, no how.
261742 Toys? I mean I could understand the more... impressive ones, but not over all.
261782
Whips and lashes don't hold any sort of attraction for me. Nor do paddles or anything of that sort.
You get where I am going, here.
261872 Ah. I was gonna say vibrators, eggs, and dildos are a fun way to spice things up. Seem those fall under your safe line.
261872 You can feel free to answer both responses in one post. How are those edits coming? I just sent the revised version of chapter 1 to Ven.
261728 Very well then, I'll check it out.
262370 Yep just waiting on Ven for proofreading although I already updated it with a rough copy since it's still better than before. You still might wish to wait till later tonight though for the final cut of revision.
262430 Okay, then I WON'T read it.
262431 Sounds like a plan.
262434 How long should it take for the proofreading to be finished?
262438 261104 From Ven? Depends, he's been itching for something new to proofread all week though so I suspect he'll do it all at once. He did the last 10800 words in maybe 5 hours. This is 8000 some so 3ish if its not to littered with errors. Which I kinda went to town on it myself so he should be mostly in the clear. Still depends when he's able to sit down and get to it though.
I tagged him in here so if he has something to add he can.
262438 261872Oh, and according to IC last we discussed it, he has all the stuff for the second chapter at the house he's at now so not long on that front either hopefully.
262452 Alright, I just can't take it anymore. I must see what happens next and hopefully a great ending where Spike gets ALL six mares.
262452>>262467
Bad news and good news.
The bad news is that I am at my Dad's house right now.
The good news is that my little brother is at my Mom's house, and he can email me all my stuff, once I call him.
The more bad news is that he is at band camp, today. Additional bad news is that I couldn't work on it at my mom's house due to not having Microsoft Word.
More good news now... I finally talked to FlimFlamBros on skype. And we had a very productive conversation. Needless to say, we had some pretty good ideas.
262491 Okay then.
262511
Once I talk to my little brother, it will be back over here.
262491
She just wants to lay the dragon of her dreams! Why are you making her cry?
262467 I should hope, or that title and cover art are really misleading.
262519 Okay.
262537 I mean Eternal looked like a happy ending, but now it's up in the air where this will go.
262540 MASS MURDER AND CHAOS! I mean... yay love! This coming from the guy who made Spike cry and believe Rarity didn't love him, and then throw him to some all powerful overload of a cult. Who proceeded to kick the shit out of him. The lesson here conflict makes things interesting and without it stuff's just boring.
262511
That came out a little bit more creepy than you think it did... because, as a double entendre, the slang meaning is immediately obvious, but the hidden meaning... is a little bit more than just a little disturbing. Especially when the two are combined.
262553You should consider a google docs account so you can keep everything online. Very useful.
262571
I am beginning to agree with you.
262575 All of my stuff is on my external, both computers, Google docs, and email. I like being able to access things anywhere.