getting a bit depressed by this · 8:39am Jul 16th, 2015
My latest fic, Mother's Protection, has been getting more dislikes than likes.
Why? Is it really THAT bad?
If people don't like it, they could at least tell me why. True, the first comments i've gotten are positive, but why are so many disliking it?
Probably the anthro, a lot of people get weirded out by it.
3242478 and yet i've seen plenty of other anthros with tons of likes far outweighing the dislikes
The worlds just full of critics. Use them to better yourself and get ides.
i don't know about anyone else, but i for one think it is a good idea. An interesting idea. Personally, i look forward to seeing what happens next.
Either way, you got my like and my favourite.
you have my like I thought is was good.
I didn't thumb down, but this:
Yeah, that's a bit much. You're not giving much _hope_ for this universe, you know. ;-) Twilight being traumatized to the point of comatose, and needing to be reborn? Seems like a decent hook for a story. Dark, depressing times, one last bastion of safety? Eh, alright. Their opponent on the edge of being Pinhead? Not quite my cup of tea.
can someone give me the link ? I can't find it on Autum's profile
Edit: Nevermind, the mature filter was activated
Okay, after reading really quickly the story, I can say that the concept got me weirded out
Gory .... You don't seem to need it
curse word .... out of place but alright
But when you started talking about breast milking, and Twilight becoming a foal, I was like
i.imgur.com/2w591.gif
Yeah .....
Your story was weird, the gore could have been left unseen, and the breast thing could have been left unsaid ... moreover, it's not really my type of story. I'm not going to put a dislike on it, but I think you have the reason for why you have so many dislike on your story for no reason.
So, don't worry, you may have 25 people who don't like your concept, but 21 want you to make more, so come on, don't listen to the dislike if nobody comment about it
OK, I can see where some people might not like, or could be uncomfortable with this. But I do think this is an interesting plot line and am looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Please don't give up on this because of some dislikes. Dark and disturbing stories can easily cause some people to turn away. For example, a good friend of mine finds quite a bit of the Anthro pony artwork to be quite disturbing to him. He feels that it demines and degrades the innocence of the original show. But not everyone of my friends feel this way, and we do enjoy the anthro stuff.
So please don't let this get to you. It's pretty much impossible to get everyone to like everything. Do what you enjoy and I'm sure you'll find plenty of like minded people who will enjoy what you produce.
I personally am liking it. The gore part was a bit much with what Eris did to Twilight's parents but given that you made this Eris a sadistic evil one, it fits well then. The multiverse is big after all so there is bound to be versions of the villains that are willing to murder in even the most horrible ways. Lets just hope that the alicorn amulet can somehow access life, revival, and resurrection type magic cause if Twilight ever returns to being herself instead of Trixlight, then bringing her parents back good as new is gonna be important. Or at least time travel spells to stop Eris before she can destroy Twilight mentally and emotionally.
Reasons I believe it got It's dislikes. (please note I liked it)
chapter one. Good start. Some grammer problems but some spit shining editing will fix that.
Chapter 2. well. Not going to lie doesn't follow Discord's memo. I know she's Eris and ya really made her into a very sadistic (buy some apples) but dude... rape + murder does not do well for the Discord fans. Shit you could have just had left them the need to poo or vomit for the princesses and as for the parents... well I don't know what could have replaced that kind of pain. But seperating her from her friends and Discord was still pretty good.
Chapter 3. Breast milk and some grammer and unnecessary words. Other than that, that's all I can think of captain. The rest is up to you now.